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wprincessannw
2008-07-07 . chapter 1
LOL
SNN
2008-07-06 . chapter 1
This was hilariously awkward. Excellent job! =]
Miss Ginny Granger
2008-05-15 . chapter 1
That was amazing.
I love Ralph!
Haha.
fairiekween13
2008-05-07 . chapter 1
Awesome! I love Ralph!
Aqua88
2008-03-12 . chapter 1
--Ralph nudged Derek and snickered, “Stimulate.” Derek smirked. Sam made a gulping noise.--

*dies of laughter*

Oh Ralph.

GREAT job =)

-Kelly
Chibi Mistress
2008-03-03 . chapter 1
awkward... yet hilarious.
jannikajade
2008-02-27 . chapter 1
I love Ralph a whole lot.

You wrote him SO well. This was super cute. I liked Kendra too- and Trevor of course. I miss him he should come back into canon.

I loved this-

ooh oh oh oh and the "incest" reference was brillant and subtle. The two of them as team captains was perfect- so IC, and I poor Sam...

Loved it.
True Love Lives Forever
2008-02-26 . chapter 1
That was hilarious. You've done an amazing job with this oneshot. By the way, during the fake scenario between Casey and Trevor, I thought how weird if it had to be Noel instead of Trevot. Now that would have been something. Anyway, that was great and I hope to hear more from you soon!
MaybeBaby27
2008-02-26 . chapter 1
Oh my God twin that was bloody brilliant! I was laughing most of the way through. You did a great job at keeping them all in character and the entire story had the perfect amount of awkwardness and tension.

If I could give you stars, you get 10 out of 5.
Lanter
2008-02-25 . chapter 1
Wow, tough prompt but you nailed it. One of the funniest fics that I have ever read. Awesome job.
arbitraryink
2008-02-25 . chapter 1
This fic was just full of laughs! The sex-ed talks at my school were never so awkward as these ones - for one thing, we didn't have to put condoms on bananas, and we never had to use sock puppets.

And no one ever mentioned discolouration and a rash... as much as I dislike Max, I feel pity for him having to air that business to the world.

"He would have to think twice about just barging into her room now." HAHA. We all know what he REALLY thinks about barging into her room in one of those private moments ;D

Since reading this, I've already been looking up more Remily fics here on and I'm starting to totally love them. Ralph could use someone like Emily, and Emily could use the comic relief after spending so much time with neurotic!Casey. Uncomfortable!Sam was very believable, too, which made it all the better.

I'm also stoked that you included the Golden Girls! Great job. :) The recepient was lucky to have you writing for her!

- arbitraryink
dreamingdarling
2008-02-25 . chapter 1
ah!
what a great little oneshot!
x
Zuzzeroo
2008-02-25 . chapter 1
LMAO
TheBucketWoman
2008-02-25 . chapter 1
I am so psychotically in love with this fic right now.

Golden Girls? Why do I picture Sofia whacking Max over the head with her little straw bag?

I'm noticing a pattern to Sam's behavior? Poor poor worrying Sam.

There's just so much I love about this fic, even tho I feel the absence of Sheldon. :-)
Catdogg
2008-02-25 . chapter 1
Oh how I cringed during this lol. It was excellent though. Everyone was extremely IC, and I especially loved Ralph's lines. I'm really starting to like the idea of Remily...

Great work, Brandi!
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