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sixteenlaps
2008-07-19
ch 1, anon.
abusethe first chapter almost made me stop reading, seemed strange and choppy to me. but the second chapter was pure comedy. keep writing
Megan Consoer
2008-07-10
ch 2,
abuseI really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Lemonizer
2008-04-09
ch 1,
abusecomplete and utter **.
Southernswimmer
2008-03-19
ch 2,
abuseWOW! I like it. Please hurry and post!
zafaran
2008-03-12
ch 2,
abuseI like the beginning of this story, and I'm looking forward to watching Hermione and Severus settle down to a happily-ever-after. Severus is my favorite character, and I like stories where he gets used to good effect. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Alex the Anachronistic
2008-03-11
ch 1,
abuseCan't apparate into Hogwarts. 'Tis impossible.

"“Working for Lord Voldamorte, I had to keep a charm on myself to look the part of a death eater, “This is how I look without the charms.”" WHAT?

Lol.

Um. Very two-dimensional . . . sorry.
Artemis Virgin Goddess
2008-02-28
ch 2,
abuseupdate soon
A for Antechinus
2008-02-26
ch 2,
abusehey this is pretty intresting, just sometimes it doesn't make sense as there may be a mispelt word or something. anyways thanks for the update. cheers
spikeecat
2008-02-26
ch 2,
abuseGreat so far. I really liked Harry's reaction. I can't wait to find out how the others take the news.
Quop
2008-02-26
ch 2,
abusenot too bad. there are some mistakes that detract from it though. anyway, keep up the good work and update soon!
A for Antechinus
2008-02-25
ch 1,
abusehey this is really good, please continue. cheers
MynameisInu
2008-02-25
ch 1,
abuseI love this story so far!! i can't wait for the next chapter!
Artemis Virgin Goddess
2008-02-25
ch 1,
abuseupdate soon!
Quop
2008-02-25
ch 1,
abusenice start. i hope you update soon!
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