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| sixteenlaps 2008-07-19 ch 1, anon. | abusethe first chapter almost made me stop reading, seemed strange and choppy to me. but the second chapter was pure comedy. keep writing |
| Megan Consoer 2008-07-10 ch 2, | abuseI really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? |
| Lemonizer 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abusecomplete and utter **. |
| Southernswimmer 2008-03-19 ch 2, | abuseWOW! I like it. Please hurry and post! |
| zafaran 2008-03-12 ch 2, | abuseI like the beginning of this story, and I'm looking forward to watching Hermione and Severus settle down to a happily-ever-after. Severus is my favorite character, and I like stories where he gets used to good effect. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm |
| Alex the Anachronistic 2008-03-11 ch 1, | abuseCan't apparate into Hogwarts. 'Tis impossible. "“Working for Lord Voldamorte, I had to keep a charm on myself to look the part of a death eater, “This is how I look without the charms.”" WHAT? Lol. Um. Very two-dimensional . . . sorry. |
| Artemis Virgin Goddess 2008-02-28 ch 2, | abuseupdate soon |
| A for Antechinus 2008-02-26 ch 2, | abusehey this is pretty intresting, just sometimes it doesn't make sense as there may be a mispelt word or something. anyways thanks for the update. cheers |
| spikeecat 2008-02-26 ch 2, | abuseGreat so far. I really liked Harry's reaction. I can't wait to find out how the others take the news. |
| Quop 2008-02-26 ch 2, | abusenot too bad. there are some mistakes that detract from it though. anyway, keep up the good work and update soon! |
| A for Antechinus 2008-02-25 ch 1, | abusehey this is really good, please continue. cheers |
| MynameisInu 2008-02-25 ch 1, | abuseI love this story so far!! i can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Artemis Virgin Goddess 2008-02-25 ch 1, | abuseupdate soon! |
| Quop 2008-02-25 ch 1, | abusenice start. i hope you update soon! |