Aww, so sad. Never liked the way Hitsugaya is so hung up in Momo. Poor Matsumoto.

hey. i really enjoyed your story. i thought it was unique the way you set it out. by far one of the best short stories i've read.
i hope you keep writing and i'll keep a look out for more.
maybe you could read mine when i eventually post it haha.
i was very satisfied.
have a nice day
tasha x

Wow!! it's wonderful, poor Renji though, but it's so him to stay and let her cry!!

I will read this gem, over and over again. I love the way you conected each paragraph with three words. Espectacular realmente, las palabras dan vuelta en mi cabeza!

Such talent!!
xoxoxo
Z

this was just beautiful!

arr... that was so sweet. Renji loved her, she loved Toshiro and he loved himamori. i really hope this ent a oneshot plz up date

Poor Rangiku. This was very sad. Sniff.

Great job! I really liked it. Poor Renji. My only criticism is that during sex when she's thinking of the man she is in love with I don't think she would call him by his last name. Hitsugaya is always reminding people to call him Hitsugaya taichou because they all call him Toshiro, and I think she'd probably use a more familiar term when thinking about her best friend. But thats just my opinion, and otherwise I really enjoyed it.

ZOMG - I LOVED this!! Gorgeously bitter-sweet, well-written and extremely well-captured. It was positively heart-rending!! Wow...this really hit me, I'm SO glad it's not true! Poor...oh, everybody! *hugz Rangiku, Renji and Hitsugaya; solidly smacks Hinamori over the head* Gawh, just another reason not to like her... XP