|Reviews for Despotic, Quixotic and Everlasting|
| MyUsedRomance 9/16/11 . chapter 23
fantastic. i'm loving this !verse, too. great work. :)
| iknowyurflamretardent 9/16/11 . chapter 23
You should separate your in-canon and au drabbles-I'm pretty sure this stuff started out with in-canon stuff.
All the long descriptions of music and clothes and stuff is kind of boring. There's not enough dialogue but then, the last stuff you had with this iverse, the dialogue was dull. I know you're excited about writing this, but Sasuke seems like a overprotective, emo wimp. It lacks any interesting plot or storyline, like your older writings, but I'm sure lots of younger kids will like it with all the glitter and glitz and they'll praise it to heaven, but I will not bullsh%t you. Sakura seems like a wasted space here-no personality at all, unless it's just supposed to be a druggie loser or something. It's like you took a miley sirus concert and stuck Naruto characters in it.
Sorry if it seems harsh, I'm trying to be honest, you write well. Love your older, in-canon and unfinished work.
I absolutely think you should just make up your own characters for this AU stuff instead of falling back on someone else's, then it would sound more believable-you have the talent to do it and the fan base, you should just go for it, you'll grow as a writer if you step out of your comfort zone. Good luck.
Feel free to delete this if you want. I understand-it's not what you want to hear and others will throw a fit about seeing it- but at least I was honest and didnt just say, update!
I won't go back to see what others said because I don't read others reviews-they can say whatever they want about me, it won't matter.
Don't worry, I probably won't be back to review any more of this story.
One and out is enough.
| Naiya12 9/16/11 . chapter 23
The different writing style fits Sasuke's somewhat...irratic personality. I can only imagine his thoughts would be the same way. Loved this chapter and can't wait for the next two!
| Princess Ren 9/15/11 . chapter 23
Awesome! I want more from this plot... SO what will Sasuke do now?
| Blue Aidelle 9/15/11 . chapter 23
please update soooon!
I love this plot.
It's soooooo very interesting and well written!
| GreenRose916 9/10/11 . chapter 4
The whole "remove headband when gambling for konohas name-sake" killed me. could not stop laughing. this was a fun Drabble i really enjoyed reading it!
| Mokimoki-chan 9/10/11 . chapter 22
Lol emotionally constipated body guard. Love ur song choices(;
| Tukiko K 9/5/11 . chapter 22
They belong together. The end.
| Tukiko K 9/5/11 . chapter 21
Wow. This is beautiful and so so sad. Great job!
| Tukiko K 9/5/11 . chapter 19
I love this one too.
| Tukiko K 9/5/11 . chapter 18
I may have already reviewed this, but I love this drabble. It is just too beautiful and perfect.
| shasa 9/5/11 . chapter 22
Again you strike! It was awesome. :) I love all of the emotions and the wild descriptions and i could see it all so clearly in my minds eye! I love it. :) Greatttt job! Can't wait for your next update on..umm.. anything really! :)
| Tukiko K 9/5/11 . chapter 17
Ooh zombies. Awesome!
| Tukiko K 9/5/11 . chapter 16
| Tukiko K 9/5/11 . chapter 15