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dogman15
2009-05-11 . chapter 11
Wow - it's been a long time since I read this story. I finally got around to it, though. I really like how you're integrating elements of the books faithfully.
reniRCx
2008-12-30 . chapter 11
I just read this entire thing, and it's awesome! It seemed a little slow at first, but now that you're getting into the events of the actual story, it ought to get better. I like the title, and the explanation you gave for it(at some point.) Alex seems to be a very realistic character, and I like seeing her reaactions and things. Update soon!
supernae
2008-12-29 . chapter 11
I get so excited when you update! =D
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
voodooqueen126
2008-12-29 . chapter 11
This is really well done. I look forward to the next chapter.
voodooqueen126
2008-12-29 . chapter 1
You're seriously hurting my suspension of disbelief.
voodooqueen126
2008-12-29 . chapter 10
In sydney Zoo the big cats are kept behind a lot of glass. You would never be able to pat them!
voodooqueen126
2008-12-29 . chapter 9
Very well done-how she gave away the end accidentally.
voodooqueen126
2008-12-29 . chapter 8
Well done-often Mary Sue characters have fantastic clothes that they couldn't possibly afford.
voodooqueen126
2008-12-29 . chapter 7
Yay! Very well done.
voodooqueen126
2008-12-29 . chapter 6
It raises the very good question: if we were to meet the animorphs what would we say.
voodooqueen126
2008-12-29 . chapter 5
It is a very clever title.
voodooqueen126
2008-12-29 . chapter 4
According to Terenia this is a very funny story.
oOKayleeOo
2008-12-29 . chapter 11
Hey, thanks for updating. Once again your quality of writing is above par and the plotline is still verry interesting. Keep up the good work i can't wait to see where this leads to.
jinnie
2008-12-29 . chapter 11
Wow, I love this chapter! I can't wait to read more, I have to say that your writing is becoming even more succint and I can definitely see the story playing out in my mind :) Great going, keep the good work up!
musiclover1933
2008-12-28 . chapter 10
How long has it been ever since you haven't updated?
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