Reviews for The Invasion of Earth

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The Great Valley Guardian 2008-08-12 ch 30,	abuseWell...it seems Coop and the rest of Humanity has finally met the Flood! Oh noez! But knowing Coop and Willis they will watch each others backs and get out alive...I just wonder what surprises they are in for...it makes me wonder...Is the Prophet even there...or is it a Flood form already...that would be AWESOME! Make the Prophet a flood...oh...dangerous!
D.Doberman 2008-08-01 ch 29,	abuseOkay! I finally caught up to you. Whew... that was tiring. Great job! Can't wait till you get back home!
DustFuR 2008-07-07 ch 29,	abuseSorry I haven't been reviewing. Again, this is the most detailed and now unforgiving story ever! Thank you for this exciting trilogy! XD Hope you have a great summer from here on out.
Row 2008-06-30 ch 29, anon.	abuseAs always I enjoyed reading this latest installment, well done. And to reply to eg's review, just because Lt Garry didn't portray an Elite ripping a human in half doesn't make his/her story lame... Honestly, I think you're portraying them quite well, especially in dialouge.
D.Doberman 2008-06-05 ch 13,	abuseWonder if Willis knew them... WILLIS IS THEM! ANOTHER one of those cliffhangers!
D.Doberman 2008-06-05 ch 12,	abuseI hate it when you do these cliffhanger chapters! Because I can't just stop there, I have to continue reading to find out what happens. haha, still doin' a good job. Keep it up.
john010117 2008-05-22 ch 27,	abuseThe ending was touching. Can't wait for more!
reviewer 2008-05-22 ch 27, anon.	abusepretty good job, but an elite would make fighting the flood a top priority, remember that the elites tell all the people in their race about the flood. they all know how dangerous it is. but the foolish humans think its good to keep it from their people. look at how seriously the elites took the flood in halo 3. as rtas vadum said in halo 3: "a single flood spore can end an entire species, were it not for the arbiters counsel i would have glassed your ENTIRE planet!". i hope you incorperate some ideas from halo 3, and characters from the game.
D.Doberman 2008-05-07 ch 5,	abuseI found what chapter I was currently at. Great chapter and I'll definitely read more later, because I have to go.
reviewer 2008-05-03 ch 26, anon.	abuseoh and lastly: elites are much tougher,smarter than the foolish brutes.
reviewer 2008-05-03 ch 26, anon.	abuseoh and, i agree that elites are not infallable. nothing in the universe is invincible... but they are an extremly smart, tough race. ive found that spartans and elites are similar in many regards: they are both extremly smart, tough and awesome lol... even if i favour elites alot more. "WORT! WORT! WORT!" one of my favourite elite sayings, it means "GO! GO! GO!". keep up the good work.
reviewer 2008-05-03 ch 26, anon.	abuseah... sorry bout my earlier thing lol i jumped the gun. yea i do understand that humans would think of all elites as "evil" just because the elites were following orders. i think your doing a good job on the story though. a few tips:the elites left the covenant so they all got rid of the "ee" suffix in their name, so Atalom ‘Kuatee should be called Aralom Kuat. also elites are 9 feet tall when standing upright, they are 8 foot 6 in apperance because their armor hunches them over a bit. also you should introduce arbiter, ship master rtas vadum, ntho shraom. usze thaom and masterchief into this story itd make it 100 percent awesome, also elites respect humans as worthy adversarys but regard them as lesser beings and the elites have most of the hunters and grunts working with them against the covenant, a few hunters and grunts stayed with the covenant against the elites though. itd be good if you introduced the elite army and the battlegroup of ships rtas vadum brought to earth. lol alot of tips, but im a huge fan of the games and elites are my favourite race in general. hope you incorperate my ideas, your doing a good job.
reviewer 2008-04-29 ch 21, anon.	abusestop portraying elites as weak people who would knuckle under to some humans. elites are the top race of the halo universe.. potray them as such. however your doing a good job portraying how overreacting and savage the humans are.. im not being sarcastic
john010117 2008-04-29 ch 25,	abuseHoly crap. Now you're bringing the Flood into the storyline. Nothing could've been more thrilling to see each species duck it out. Nice job with the battle scenes!
Knight 56 2008-04-25 ch 24,	abuseAmazing chapter, and I can't wait for more.

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