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Reviews For: Lullaby

Verina100
2008-05-23
ch 1,
abuseoh wow, that was so sad...but perfectly written. And im glad i finally stumbled across a non gay fanfic (i dont have anything against them but i was wondering if anyone realized that Jordan and Perry were married with two kids and a lot of attraction between them) Anyways, that was beautiful...plz write more Jordan Perry
Thanks for posting.
Ramfazzle Fantazmicazzle
2008-05-21
ch 1,
abusei am not crying. i'm not. i'm totally not. i'm so not...sob. ok, i lied. i am, but only a little. ok, stop glaring, i'm totally bawling. that was so sad. i mean seriously, that was too heartbreaking, i almost couldn't read it. but i did, and now i'm sad. sob. but anyway, i'm rambling. this story was awesome (but i'll say it again, so sad) i look forward to seing more stories from you
X-term-in-8
2008-04-09
ch 1,
abusei won't cry...damn it *rubs eyes franticaly* i will not cry...oh to hell with it *bawls* that was so sad...
SupermanPleaseSaveMe
2008-04-01
ch 1,
abuseOmg thats so sad!

Im so not crying right now *shifty eyes*

Great job =]
xx
crazy4lyf
2008-03-01
ch 1,
abuseomg...that was so sad. how could you do that to alittle baby?...sniffle
mudhousejunkie224
2008-02-26
ch 1,
abuseah this was so sad. you did a great job of writing the characters. great story!
JDElliotForever
2008-02-26
ch 1,
abuseGod that was so unbelievably sad. Aah the bit where Jack was asking why she couldn't come home was just heartbreaking :(.
saltoftheearth
2008-02-26
ch 1,
abuseoh my goodness. that was so heartbreaking and wonderfully written. tragic, and still in character. beautifully done.
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