I like how you portrayed Abel in this. Most storied surrounding him tend to just focus on his personal angst/romantic troubles (not that he doesn't angst or have romantic troubles), and it was nice that this story was...in the middle, for lack of a better description. I mean, he angsted, he was upset, but then he mellowed out, and he didn't switch back to the bubbly personality of denial to do it.

Lovely, simply lovely.

I can understand why you don't want this story taken in with the rest of the Unexpected Results storyline, but oh how wonderful is acceptance.

I am absolutely certain that I've never read an erotica piece, that incited tears.

I'm not too sure if I liked the idea of them making love, but this story was nicely done.

Christina

That was...wow...very well done. And I can fully understand why this wouldn't be in your Unexpected Reults series. Good though. And aww. Abel. -lulz- (laughing at myself)

That was absolutely beautiful. ^_^

As I said, awesome. I liked the fact that you didn't have to add in too many details, but just enough where we know what's happening. Master of words.

I loved it devART, and I love it here.