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| Dragonluvr1993 2008-06-08 ch 6, | abuseHa, I just read all of those oneshots, and it was fun just thinking about them! Of course, I've always thought of Lugia as a girl as well as Zapdos and Ho-oh as a guy like Articuno, but...that's just me. And instead of doing the normal Uxie-is-guy-and-Azelf-is-girl thing I've seen so much lately, you did something different, and I'm happy for that. I especially liked the Lugia/Ho-oh one! It was funny! XD ~DL ('Dragon Lover') |
| Attila12 2008-05-21 ch 6, | abuseAwsome chapter. So cute! And I like the way you made Uxie a girl and Azelf a boy. |
| goldeneye101 2008-05-21 ch 6, | abuseSuspenceful, I liked it! Anyways, I as expecting the book to be Pride and Prejudice. Boring book ( I had to read it in school xD), but it is a romance novel. But the cover... not expected, like the Spanish Inquisition... Nice job, once I get back from Chicago, I'm doing my own! |
| SilverUmbra 2008-05-21 ch 6, | abuse... So... cute... *dies from fluff overload* You did an awesome job with this! I loved the last line, too! It really tied everything together well! :D Awesome job! |
| Garnet Princess 2008-05-15 ch 5, | abuseThis is such a cute chapter. I love the contrast between Lugia and Ho-oh. Lugia's playful personality made me smile. Very well written. :) I am also curious to see your take on Arceus/Giratina, especially after seeing a brief moment of affection between them in this chapter, and Dialga/Palkia. I would love to see one or both of those in future chapters. |
| Garnet Princess 2008-05-15 ch 4, | abuseI am really starting to like the Mewtwo/Deoxys pairing. Again, I love how you stayed true to character and connected the characters by their experiences. It made the growing relationship between them more realistic and interesting. |
| Garnet Princess 2008-05-15 ch 3, | abuseHmm ... this was one pairing I did not expect. I like how you brought the situation upon them though. I don't think it would've worked out any other way and you wove it together quite nicely. It was rushed a little near the end but it wasn't by much and I feel that it works better with one shots than full-fledged stories. |
| Garnet Princess 2008-05-15 ch 2, | abuseBeing a big Darkrai fan, I am very happy you kept the Dark-type Legendary in character. I am also a fan of the Darkrai and Cresselia pairing, so this one shot was a real treat for me. I love how they interact with each other here. Again, there were no grammar or spelling mistakes that I could see and it was written just as well as before, if not better. This my favourite one shot so far. :) |
| Garnet Princess 2008-05-15 ch 1, | abuseThis is an excellent start to a great one shot collection. It is very well written, has no grammar or spelling mistakes that I could see and realistically portrays the emotions of each character. This really drew me in and I'm not a fan of one shots. This series is quite the gem. Good job. |
| xSapphirexRosesxFanx 2008-03-18 ch 5, | abusenice... |
| CoHeeD17 2008-03-16 ch 2, | abuseOmg, this is so wonderful! |
| Galbinus 2008-03-10 ch 5, | abuseAww.. :3 That was absolutely adorable! Lol, who would think that Ho-Oh wasn't the partying type? xD I really liked the way you wrote Lugia and Ho-Oh, though. :] Hope you'll update soon! [>>Galbinus] |
| Attila12 2008-03-10 ch 5, | abuseAwsomeness! :D I like how you made Ho-oh the girl! I think I like this pairing, despite the fact that in my mind, I like to pair up Lugia/Articuno and Ho-oh/Moltres. As a suggestion, maybe you could try Raikou/Suicune for the next chapter, since you're so good at it. |
| Quaystor 2008-03-10 ch 5, | abuseTo quote Bill and Ted: "Excellent! *air guitar*" |
| SilverUmbra 2008-03-09 ch 5, | abuseSque! =D That was utterly adorable! I love how Ho-oh is all haughty and proud while Lugia is laid back and party loving. **Thinks of legendaries at party** Huh... I think I have an idea now! Well, this was great! And I'm glad you wrote it, it was hard for me to write my own LH oneshot, mainly because I'm bad with birds, but you pulled this off perfectly! **Runs off to write** |