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Kitty-chan and Nya-chan 2008-07-08 ch 3,	abuseI really like this story, it is really cute and awsome, but is peter going to become spider-man in this? just asking. :3
crystal cerberus 2008-07-02 ch 20, anon.	abusethat was really good
Brightfire15 2008-06-28 ch 20,	abuseThis is a really great story and I'm looking forward to seeing how it ends. I wish in the comics, Harry and Peter had grown up together.
Lizzy 2008-06-25 ch 20, anon.	abuseThis story is pure, unadulterated joy...I honestly can't wait until your next update. You've not only captured this wonderful world, but my fluffy fangirl heart. Liz
Lady Geuna 2008-06-25 ch 20,	abuse(woobie!) Oh... (moved) That was so... PERFECT. And oh Matthew, go! Go! I know you can defend Otto, I just know it! And Rosie is OKAY! I loved the dialog in this one. My favorite part had to be when Rosie was talking to Otto, though the back and forth between Branch and Matthew was great, too. It makes me really wonder how his trail is going to go, considering. As always, looking forward to more! Geuna~
firedraygon 2008-06-24 ch 20,	abuseI like how you handled Otto's case. Hee, and having him try to omit things from his story and getting caught -- I was very amused. I'm glad things turned out alright and I'm hoping they'll stay that way in the long run. Lovely work. Please write more soon! ~fd97
Marcus1233 2008-06-23 ch 19,	abuseGood for Harry. Even if he doesn't have any superior intellect or powers like Otto or Peter and he didn't actually participate in the direct assault, he is nevertheless an important role in their lives. Hate to admit it, he inherits his father's calm demeanor and the sense on what was actually to be done when the need arises. IN some way, he's more mature than Peter is.
Marcus1233 2008-06-23 ch 18,	abuseNo, no, no! You can't do this to me. Deny me my rights! I wanna know the entire fight scene. Just having the angsty emotions from Peter, isn't enough. Having him as a favourite character kinda sucked the whole fun of having sadistic thought. I wanna read the fight scene, revel in the brutality of it all. Specks of blood flying, metals clanging against metal, bones cracking...(pants, eyes gleaming madly)... Err, ah...(chuckles sheepishly) Sorry bout that. Got carried away. Withdrawal symptoms. (wipes imaginary drool away) Vacation's here and I have no access to my usual daily mind torturing of my friends. (chuckles)
Marcus1233 2008-06-23 ch 17,	abuseDamn, a culmination of exciting events transpiring right before me. I still feel giddy but I won't creep you out by cackling like a ugly old witch though. (chuckles)
Marcus1233 2008-06-23 ch 16,	abuse(shivers) If it weren't for the fact that Garry and Peter are I wouldn't have any semblance of sanity left, probably giggling with glee like an idiot from the carnage and painful emotions. (shudders) Such exquisite anguish.
Marcus1233 2008-06-23 ch 14,	abuseUh oh. I kinda have thing trouble's right ahead on this. I could see the gloomy cloud overhead too. (chuckles) Nothing like Pete's Spidey sense...No tingling sensation...more like shivers down the spine...from sadistic pleasure? (chuckles) I feel angst come calling.
Marcus1233 2008-06-23 ch 13,	abuseThat no good, loathsome...Oh! (clenches fist in frustrations) That's what a loyal fan in me did. Now, the next one is the ...ah, err, more sadistic part: The man's a bloody genius, sticking the sword at every angle that would drew blood faster. (chuckles)
Marcus1233 2008-06-23 ch 11,	abuseBastard! But somehow that label is not strong enough to depict that rat's duplicitous and manipulative nature. I would go with a Jackass but an A-hole sounded closer to home but still far off from target.
Marcus1233 2008-06-23 ch 9,	abuseWhat a bastard! And that's just saying it mildly. So, Pete's still going to be Spidey then? How about Otto...and Rosie?
Marcus1233 2008-06-23 ch 8,	abuseI remember his name now. Norman. And I recalled it before reading this chapter. (chuckles) And you giving Norman's name in the Author's note in the last chapter wasn't the reason why to...though having the letter 'Norma' did help a bit. (chuckles) You show him Harry. (mutters pessimistically: though it's obviously futile to act nonchalant about the whole matter) This is a reversal of roles for both boys. It's usually the other way around isn't it? Well, Pete sure knows how to connect the dots swiftly.

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