Love this. It sounds so much like Avon. I always felt bad for him. Blake was such a bully. Right from the start.

I like what you pointed out about what Blake was doing to Avon. I didn't think about Blake endangering Avon's life by what he was saying. He never cared, did he. You bring out his arrogance so well here.

Thank you for this. Do you plan to continue this with the rest of the episode? Or if you can, do all the episodes and give us Avon's views like you did here?

I like this version a lot better than the televised scene. Wonder if you are going to make it the version for the rest of your fic?
Pity the writers didn't think of it. It would mean that Avon isn't the only paranoid one.