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| Water85 2008-03-28 ch 1,  | abuseThat was so beautiful and so very sad! I really feel sorry for Rukia sometimes, she's so lost and lonely. I especially loved the last line- "And so she prayed to a god she had never really believed in; entreated with all her heart to keep all of them safe" Brilliant stuff. |
| darkangel1910 2008-03-27 ch 1, | abuseI think that you captured the essence of Rukia. She does feel guilty. And I think that you are right about her not thinking that her life mattered to someone. |
| Crazy IchiRuki fangirl 2008-03-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was one of the best fics I ever read! You brought out Rukia's pain so beautifully, so naturally, that I felt like I was in her place, experiencing everything she felt. Thank you for writing this masterpiece. It made my day. |
| elfundercover7 2008-03-04 ch 1, | abuse"Too angsty? Too sappy and corny?" no, i think it's a perfect balance ;) |
| nemesis 2008-03-04 ch 1, anon. | abusegorgeous retelling of the bleach story! keep it up |
| alexis 2008-03-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseWonderful! Excellent characterization of Rukia. |
| DeadlyBeauty23 2008-03-03 ch 1, | abuseI liked it. I think you did a very well job at capturing Rukia's emotions, I was surprised Ichigo didn't show up at the end.o.o but anyway... Good job. Keep it up! -DB |
| Secret Starr 2008-02-26 ch 1, | abuseAw, that was good. Angst is something that I think Ichigo and Rukia can have, and you made it way good. Nice work. |
| Alice001 2008-02-26 ch 1, | abusethat was really good! I think you captured Rukia perfectly. Amazing job! |