AW! HOW CUTE!

Aw, whatta cutie.

I have to say that I like this. I like this very, very much.

It was just wonderful, their personality, the way you wrote it, it was just absolutely fantastic, and I'm going to add it to my favourites.

I absolutely LOVE this story. I've always been a fan of Sirius/Lily, but this is by far the most realistic and entertaining. Well done!

aw so sweet
stupid feet CURSE YOU FLIPFLOPS stop giving me blisters!!
you really got there personality down pact there it was really good... and sweet

What a cute little Sirius/Lily oneshot. Definitely one of the better ones I have read. The talking-to-feet was very original.

"scuffed and battered tips"

"patchily polished shoes"

Argh! Real monsters!

No, Hagrid!

Eat slugs!

M. It was good. I wish Orvil would buy me some chocolates. Wait. He steals chocolates for me all the time ... No, I suppose that doesn't count. Oh, how bittersweet love is.

Awesome!