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Reviews For: Croissants on a Sunday morning

Palmer4President
2008-03-02
ch 1,
abuseYay! What an adorable piece of BK fluff! What do you mean you don't do fluff? I think you most definitely do! I loved everything about this; Karen keeping up with the tabloids, Bill trying to watch his figure, and the crazy cat all just added to a great story. And the last line was so adorable. I loved it! Great job!
Kayryn
2008-02-27
ch 1,
abuseYay! Most definitely yay. I hope you'll keep writing.
caramelapples
2008-02-26
ch 1,
abuseCompletely yay! :D
twentyfour.mad
2008-02-26
ch 1,
abuseExtremely cute one shot!! Haha it's so hilarious and so cute as I mentioned before. Uhh the croissants... *dribble* I want some *dribbles some more* Wow you write Bill and Karen wonderfully together!!
Do you have any more B/K stories up your sleeve? ;)

twentyfour.mad ~ Mak
chipsnopotatoes
2008-02-26
ch 1,
abuseoh too cute! my mouth is watering at the description of the bakery treats, hehe. is there a fanfic category for food writing?

btw, i like tom lennox. too bad he was fired :(
take5
2008-02-26
ch 1,
abuseYAY!YAY! What do you mean you don't do fluff, this was great! Haha, I love that you thought of me when you posted.

Other things that I loved: the bitter Tom Lennox reference, the bitter cat, the fact that Bill didn't know who Britney Spears or Miley Cyrus was, and finally, but definitely not that least, the last line. Perfection!

We are going to add this to the BK fanfic hall of fame, just in honour of you. ;)
cybertoothtiger
2008-02-26
ch 1,
abuseYay! I love to see you writing different characters. This was fun -- I could smell the bakery. Hungry, now.
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