All of your stories are delightful (I'm having a wonderful night reading through all my favorite pairings), but this one is SPECTACULAR. I love Paradise Lost, and there is an aspect of the Devil that you manages to impart on Jareth quite easily. This was beautiful; while I would love to read more, your one shots are complete on their own.

Well, that was dark and scary and evil. Which means you've pinned Jareth.

I thought this was really well written, I liked how you wrote Jareth, he was very convincing.

interesting beginning, I hope you continue it

Wow, welcome to hell, huh? I would so love to read what that would be like. I am afraid that you seemed to have opened a can of worms here. Where did he come from? how does Hoggle know about the Labyrinth? hell? This Jareth seems darker and I likey. You are incredibly talented and I hope continue your wonderful stories!

Deliciously twisted.

Oh wow. One of the best stories I've stumbled across. You have Jareth perfectly down, I heard his voice in my head.

Ohhhhhhh.

How can I rave this? A brilliant piece of work in such a short space. I bow before my superior.

VFA

I simply cannot get enough of your stories! I've been going through them these last few days... they're wonderfully written!

Again, a darker Jareth, nice to see this dark side of him portrayed without him being comic book villain style!

How wonderfully EVIL.

The ending was really sexy. I like it.

A littly creepy, but I like creepy Jareth when he's written well. Very nice.

Ah! Great fic.

I love it, it made me think about everything concerning the labringth. I really want to watch the movie now.