Reviews for Prismatic - FanFiction.Net

Reviews For: Prismatic - Reviews: Page 1 of 17

robin 2008-09-18 ch 9, anon.	abusei loved these! my favorites were ears, death, hands, smile, forever, devotion, moon, war, natural, breathing, breaking, and quiet. quiet was a very excellent ending. i liked how surreal all of them seemed, because booth and brennan in general sometimes seem like they're just zoning out the rest of the world and are content to just stare at each other for hours. i also liked the part in devotion about sacrament. devotion and commitment can be very holy, i think. especially those two, considering how it's been proven how much they need each other. once again, very nice. i really like long sentences =]
Hazmatt 2008-08-29 ch 9,	abuseWonderful chapter! I really liked these, and would look forward to any of them being longer!
LocoGreggo 2008-08-08 ch 9,	abuseApplauds Excellent work. Fantastic job.
LocoGreggo 2008-08-08 ch 8,	abuseThat's a toughie...it's a toss up between jealousy and telephone. Because i could see them both being absolutely hilarious. Though everyone of them could be expanded upon quite easily.
Noelle17 2008-08-06 ch 9,	abuseBeautiful. Heartbreaking. These sentences make me feel a story, regardless of whether I read one or all of them. I love the way you write, and I admire it more than I can say.
Lizicia 2008-08-04 ch 9,	abuseI really-really liked your story because you had a totally different approach to BB and it was a very good approach. Couldn't choose the best sentence even if I wanted to because they're all so great. One tiny note - which of them dies first? In 40, she dies first and Booth goes alone to their cabin but in 49 and 50, he is the first one. It doesn't matter so much for the story in general, just something I noticed.
awilystar 2008-08-01 ch 9,	abuseI can't remember if I commented on this chapter yet, but I just wanted to let you know (again) how much I enjoyed this series. So simple, yet you said more with fewer words. My favorite one of this batch is the wedding one, just 'cause I think that'd be how it ended up. Great work!
o0MissBennet0o 2008-08-01 ch 9,	abuseOh, I loved this little batch! Balcony, Breaking and and Bonds were very sweet, if not a litlle sad, but also, so realistic with all the real issues they could face in a romantic relationship. Wedding and Quiet were both sad and heartbreaking, but I loved it! I'll miss these, but at least we'll have other stories from you!
Cheryl 2008-07-31 ch 9, anon.	abuseBeautiful, touching and heartbreaking. I simply adore your work.
fanofbones 2008-07-31 ch 9,	abuseI really hate to see these come to an end. I've loved them all...god, I hope I remembered to review them all ;-) Sometimes I forget or get busy but everything you touch is magic...and beautifully written... Balcony - Why would she think that? I know, she can't help it but they have always been honest with each other. Breaking - Well that was just sad, don't like it lol Bonds - I love to read about that 'ache' for children of hers that she constantly denies... Weddings - that one is ripping my heart out...very sweet though Quiet - Sad...she wants to believe... All lovely as always... fab
CSIbrainwashed 2008-07-29 ch 9,	abuseIt's been a long time since I've commented on your work. I'd really like it if you continued writing sentences like these, I really enjoy them. Sorry for not always reviewing, even though I read everything. I went back and re-read the sentences, I think I'd like the see numbers 15 and 47 expanded. Those ones really moved me. My favorite sentence was number 49, that was...I can't explain it in words. It really got me. That's not one I'd like to see expanded because I would probably break down in tears. It was an amazing sentence though. I look forward to more great stuff from you. I meant to comment on All That Lies Between Us as well, all of those have been great, and I really like reading them. Thanks for writing all this great stuff, you're really talented. :)
IrishFate 2008-07-29 ch 9,	abuseI love the idea of these little glimpses. I just read them all the way through and there were some that affected me just as much as some of the multi-chapter fics have. I think if I had to pick a couple of favorites, they would have to be No. 6, Rain; No.33, Natural and No. 38, Home. Thanks for sharing.
aqiran 2008-07-29 ch 9,	abusegosh, these all hurt my heart :( so sad but beautiful work
annpa 2008-07-29 ch 9,	abuseVery enjoyable reading! My favorites are 32 - War and 36 - Heaven, but I think 06 - Rain would be a great one to continue.
DOC3 2008-07-29 ch 9,	abuseI hate to see these end, but I look forward to your efforts elsewhere. I think #47 could be expanded - for some reason that one in particular seemed to be a preface for a larger story. Regardless, these are great as always!

Return to Top