"you was" is not correct grammar. it is appalling.

"you were" is correct.

i love this story, but i'd love it more if it made proper English sense.

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UPDATE!

Amazing, simply amazing. But that part a while back with Marisol coming back was a little bit of cheating, but i guess it's excusable, because the story is awesome.

I've got two words to describe this... GREAT JOB ! You have yet to disappoint me in your art of the word. Please update or my big fan heart might explode LOL ! If you do I'll be your best friend LOL !

Okay, about time I had a chance to review. I absolutely love your story, And She Gets Discouraged. I love this story even more, though. I am your biggest fan and I hope you enjoy your break. But as a request, I would like to see more HueyXJasmine action, because this didn't seem like a fun summer, it was too much life and death situations. If they survive all this, can't they go to the beach or do normal stuff you do in summer? But otherwise, this is my favorite Boondocks fanfic on the site and I love it so much. You're a great writer and it's good to see my fellow African American actually interested in writing fanfiction, and a male at that. (No offense to other races, I was just saying) And I can't wait to read more, but it's no rush or anything, take your time. Hugs and Kisses, Danielle

dude this story is off the hook real talk you need to contact aaron some how and have him see this its that good homie

thiis shit ish effin poppin 3 lol at jazmin. She was like "huey freman" xD funny as hell man. Keep doin ya thing. :)

What the fuffin happens?

Come back and finish the story!

u are such an amazing is a really good chapter and my heart was beating. please write more!

Wow... That was a good way to spend this Sunday afternoon. I'm mad at myself. I passed by Ed's name a couple of times trying to figure out who the mystery person was. And the return of the preps, wasn't expecting it. Then you spoil us with two healthy scoops of snippets. Trigger Mike, you killing this fanfic game once more.

u updated i so happy starts 2 cry and try 2 break out of straitjacket then the door opens and a british chimp with a evvil cape.'ello 113 ready 4 ur end'.gets mad and kicks him out the glass windows.'curse u 13'.then a thud was heard 34 stories below.'eehaha he cant defeat me cause im agent 1-1-3'.takes a jetpack and flys out window.'mission done mister is slience'.'good now 4 the next mission1-1-3'.

dat was so gud! u should move the date up on dat ballin'. ur such a gud writer i love any story wit riley so im sure id lik it. keep up the gud work

Man this was good,you brought more of everything. I just ain't Ed IV to go and cross the gang. Also a quick note, Shadow Moses Remix is cancelled because I got a new PC and it wouldn't back up my files sorry. :(

But anyway, this is is an awesome story!

I love this story! I was wondering that it would be a great idea if u made a story about Boondocks but do as ATL. U know riley can be ant, huey can be Rashad, jazmin can be new new and so on. I think u could make it into an awesome fic. Great stories by the way.

peace

mysteree101