ooh, you really should update, it's an awesome story up to now. Keep up the good work ^_^
P.S - I like loomer's younger brother Stephan ; )

This was really good.
I love the Moze/Loomer pairing.
I hope you decide to finish it.

Stephen sounds hot. *drools*
lol

Love It! More please

lol, i liked it!
keep it coming!

all i can say is, watch ur spelling
but other than that, me loves it! ^_^

update soon plz!

i like it update soon

I really like it. keep the chapters coming! Please!

i love it! ^_^
update!
Leana's a bad **! i like her! =]
and u know wat's weird, i play bass just like her! well, guitar, bass, and soon to be drums. lol
but i love bass. =]