Reviews for Lovely Tonight

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seeyoustandingthere 2008-05-12 ch 1,	abusereally lovely tonight ... last line, very good. keep writing!
toothchick 2008-03-25 ch 1,	abuseThis was beautiful!! If only this is how things happened! Well, I will try to have faith that it may not be February 21, 2008--but someday in the not-too-distant future!
knr4horses 2008-03-05 ch 1,	abuseI loved it! It was so sweet, not to angsty. Very nice! And I'm not just buttering you up because you're my beta, either. Kristen PS Performance anxiety, L O L!1
beth 2008-03-02 ch 1, anon.	abuseGreat story! Very sweet and well written. You handle the spoken and unspoken really flawlessly (I always struggle with the 'he said, she replied, he quipped,' etc.) And yes, you must remain chained to your computer until you write more of the Memories-Ring story. I actually check a couple times a day for more chapters, never have I done that! I love the storyline, fabulously woven and I see hotness and angst in the future (I love her "so I don't remember, we might as well have some hot sex, we are married" vs his "I am going to Hell/I know something you don't" thing, us girls don't like to be lied to, even by a pretend 'husband'!). Can't wait-- dances with glee (looks a little like the "I have to potty" dance)
paperback-romance 2008-03-01 ch 1,	abuseI loved it! Even though you took time out of Memories to write it... lol. This was totally worth the break from Memories! I like to pretend like Sara leaving the show didn't really happen, but I like this ending much better! Yay for Sara and Gil getting married! =) One of my friends just recently got me listening to Joshua Radin, and I think he's great. This was a great story!
ilovejv33 2008-03-01 ch 1,	abuseThat was a great story. You ended it perfectly :) The last line made the whole story :D
csifan2694 2008-02-28 ch 1,	abuseI realy liked it. it was great. now go back and work on memories. please. im begging. not demanding, begging. please, please, please. lol viki please, please, please
Neelloc12 2008-02-28 ch 1, anon.	abuseGreat story, loved it. Now what about Sara and Grissom filling those empty rooms like she suggested? LOL.
sid1157 2008-02-28 ch 1,	abuseAww i loved it! Your pretty great at writing! Keep up the great work i love all of your fics!
'becca.jones 2008-02-28 ch 1,	abuseEverything is right, everything is cool. But no, not a pregnant Sara! LOL Bruno is cute and Hank is cool! See ya, girl!
leddy 2008-02-28 ch 1,	abuseThat was terrific! Loved how they got together and all the moments in between, but the ending, culminating with the marriage was the sweetest of all.
BrookeGreene 2008-02-27 ch 1,	abuseThis is an example of the kind of post GBGL fic I will read, b/c it isn't depressing and ends happily. Before I forget, which I already did once, Sara moved to swing shift, not days. That's probably not the best way to start a review, but I really will forget to say it later. I don't know if the paper towels count as an obsession per se, it's certainly weird, but an obsession... I'll have to think about that. lol. I like the mentioning of Sara waiting until she's completely out of clothes before she does laundry -exactly what I do! ;-D Is it weird that I get writer's block when I'm writing a review? I always get stuck and can't think of anything to say. Hm, my headache just went away, maybe that'll help! ... Nope, still stuck. This is when I read over bits of it again and remember all the things I forgot I wanted to say.. ;-) So, I was thinking about my main, uh... weird fanfic obsessions, and this one has like, all of them. It has multiple mentions of Sara looking gorgeous, in both very simple, casual clothes and fancier clothing. It has some of those "non-sexual bed scenes" I'm so in love with, and also the fact that they waited a while before consummating their relationship! (oops, accidentally put 'relationshop' there before, lol) Then it had the geekbaby thing (sort of, them thinking about it counts) Oh, and the fluffy/ mushy scenes! Like this line: "He didn’t bother telling her that the music was unnecessary because whenever he was with her there was music playing in his heart." So sweet :-) Well my eyes keep trying to close and my headache came back, so I ought to finish my homework and get to bed... great story!
TotalGSRfan 2008-02-27 ch 1,	abuseThis was great! It deserves a sequel (after you finish Memories!).
csibutterfly530 2008-02-27 ch 1,	abuseare they going to have kids and what about the other csi's i need answers :)
ishotsherlock 2008-02-27 ch 1,	abusethat was a lovly lovly story. AKE :D

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