Loved this story so much!

That was awesome i loved it!

That was beautiful. Please post the next part!
Although it does stand quite nicely on it's own, because you mentioned that there is more, I want more!

That was beautiful. This piece is infused with a quiet and desperate sadness that just reaches out to the reader and draws them in with the characters. It feels broken and cold, in a way that makes your stomach clench with fear that this could be it for them. The writing here was evocative and just lovely.

That is wonderful. I love how you said that the characters are owned by people who disrespect the characters they created. That is so true! Jackie and Hyde forever!

So, umm, pretty amazing. I loved this. It was just so beautiful. Isn't it funny how something so angsty can be beautiful? But this is. I love it. Awesome start and I cant wait for the next part. xx

This is a really good story and I'm so glad I stumbled across it. I'm a J/H shipper but I like how you set it after Season 8 so they had to deal with all the crap they threw at each other. [I hated S8, I swear all the characters were taken over by pod people]. But your story shows a reason for all that hatred, why they acted the way they did, why they were just so cruel to each other. And the choices that they made.

I feel sorry for Fez, because he really is a good guy. I just can't see him together with Jackie. My favorite line of his was "he just wants in your pants." Oh that sounded so much like Fez it made me laugh. Please update again because I would like to see where you are going with this. I don't review much T7S fics but I wanted to tell you how much I liked this.

And Jackie slipping into Hyde's cot at the end? My mind immediately flashed to Season 5..ah the memories

This is amazing. This is what I needed to closure. It was beautifully written and very realistic.
I'll be on the lookout for Part 2.
*~Julz~*

Oh! I'm trying not to cry. This is really beautiful, I can't wait for more!

So far i love it. The whole thing is beautiful. I could see it actually happening. Great job.

well, i guess this is me being nice then, cause that rocked. seriously, way to kick ass. please finish this soon! KUDOS! :D

Oh Sookie, I love this. It was so obvious that Jackie just wanted to be with someone when she started up with Fez, just because she was lonely. I can't imagine Hyde would ever let her marry him. Beautifully written, I'm hoping for more.

Ooh good stuff! Where's the rest?!

excellente!

oh i really like this! somehow it's different from the others. hyde and jackie aren't as...irrational? i don't know. keep going! i'd love to see a longer version or something. ~SM