   Greendragoonwing 1/1/04 . chapter 1more it good |
| Zahra 4/23/03 . chapter 1 Its GREAT! I luv it ! Must read more soon! |
| Ryoko 9/29/01 . chapter 1 It's very nice and I was wondering if there can be more. Try to write more thanks. Do you ever get caught writing these things in class? |
| Ange De Bleu baby blu eyes 9/29/01 . chapter 1 lol. that's so cute! "How come your kissing my sister Trunks?" Keep up the wonderful work! |
| michelle 9/26/01 . chapter 1 what is up with that you barely write anything you got to learn to write more buuuutttt anyways, that was good WRITE MORE! |
| Kino Makoto 9/23/01 . chapter 1 That was cute need i say more!AWWWWWWWWWWWWW mako and trunks make the best couple on the plaent! And I hate Usagi, and trunks pairs YUCKKK GR USAGI! She has a guy stop trying to take mako's! well ne wayyy soooo cute! there need to be more mak/Trunks fics out there! keep it up!
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