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i love this story, update soon! so i wonder how the z-fighters are gunna react to lita being a senshi? hey does this mean lita is a sailor scout and a z-fighter?

Yeah

I like it, but there are a lot of spelling errors in it. It does show a lot of promise though, perfect choice on the pairing! Don't wait too long with the next chapter.

gimmie more chapters

Do More asap! I LOVE IT!

wonderful! write some more!

o i love it!finish!

KEWL! Please get the next chapter out soon! It looks good !

NNNNNNNOOOOOOOOO! what's happening now? ;.; u HAVE to update this SOON! i beg of you. . .

ooohh... there aren't enough mako/trunks fics. dont tell lauren i said that. thats a new way of describing all the dimension stuff.:hiccup please continue!

I am going to check and see if you have a sequal becuse now I'm really intrested

it's gooooood, please continue

IThis story has a great start! because i am the worlds biggest makoto, and Trunks shipper i can't wait for the rest! So hurry and right ok hehe Well um...Ill be checking back frequently!
Mako-chan

cool! write more plez!

KEWL! Please get the next chapter out soon!