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Reviews For: The Mages Meet Kingdom Hearts

Death angel chick211
2008-03-25
ch 2,
abuseHmm...THAT CHAPTER WAS kinda short but,AWESOME!Did you make up that other keyblade?If so it sounds really interesting and I made up one of my own too(I'm not saying that you did).I'll post the name on my profile if you wanna see it.Well anyway please write more.Write to ya later.



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Rainpath
2008-03-01
ch 2,
abuseLovely description here. You're really impressing me.

I have a question, though: Is the story "The Truth" another Kingdom Hearts crossover?
Rainpath
2008-02-27
ch 1,
abuseWell, I don't know what Kingdom Hearts is, so I think I'm going to be a little confused with this story.

On your writing, I would say that it's prety good, but everything's happening so fast. Slow down the action a bit, so we can figure out what's going on.

Keep writing!
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