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| Death angel chick211 2008-03-25 ch 2, | abuseHmm...THAT CHAPTER WAS kinda short but,AWESOME!Did you make up that other keyblade?If so it sounds really interesting and I made up one of my own too(I'm not saying that you did).I'll post the name on my profile if you wanna see it.Well anyway please write more.Write to ya later. T.Z |
| Rainpath 2008-03-01 ch 2, | abuseLovely description here. You're really impressing me. I have a question, though: Is the story "The Truth" another Kingdom Hearts crossover? |
| Rainpath 2008-02-27 ch 1, | abuseWell, I don't know what Kingdom Hearts is, so I think I'm going to be a little confused with this story. On your writing, I would say that it's prety good, but everything's happening so fast. Slow down the action a bit, so we can figure out what's going on. Keep writing! |