Awww that was really cute. I liked all of it! I really like how Malfoy and Hermione are friends and he wants to give her that happiness he knows she's missing. Very well done!

Annika

please write more pretty please :D :D

Part of it is Viktor's inadeptness with the English language and his burly figure, but he seems to be rather cavemanish in this fic... Still, I liked the way you wrote Hermione, and the interactions between Hermione and Draco.

That was a nice little interlude, thanks for sharing

If Rowling knew anything about writing romance, Hermione would have ended up with Viktor, just like this. A much more believable and desirable pairing. Only wish it could have been longer.

As usual, your writing style is great! Vicktor should get Hermione. It's cute!

I see you wrote this as a one shot, but it has all of the things needed for a longer story. Wouldn't mind seeing a sequel.