Reviews for Just You and Me

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Emmaplease 2008-09-20 ch 17,	abuseWell, I ploughed my way through the archives. Hope you're still updating this (I'm the biggest hypocrite, but whatever!) Constructiveness...hmm, well...I guess the aura thing, the way they were conceived, that's probably the weakest part of your plot. Its not something I could imagine happening in their world, anyway. The way you've used it to basically construct an army of characters is great though, it's the kind of thing I'm always trying to do and failing miserably. Also...I like how Nathaniel and Kitty don't seem that old, even though the paternal/maternal thing is down pat. Actually, I think that's my favourite thing, Nat being all fatherly :) Bless him.
Polly Danderfluff-Mrs. Hawk... 2008-09-19 ch 17,	abuseOh, no what is Jeremy going to do with Natilie's new 'powers'? So all the levels of spirits have to obey her? Imagine the kind of power she would have if she summoned the marid from the first book. I'd be shaking in my boots if I was Jeremy! PD-Mrs. H
Wizhoger 2008-09-19 ch 17,	abuseAs you asked, my review won't a mere 'Good going!' or anything like that. This last update was really wonderful, and I am finding it difficult for finding constructive words to explain to you how nice I'm finding this chapter. Yeah, tease Jeremy however you want, I love that part too! Interesting turns, and nice way of explaining your constructive imagination. I wouldn't be much surprised if the Master Writer Jonathan Stroud extends the Trilogy to a Cycle and makes yours the fourth book. Now, keep the updates on quick and good, and I'm gonna eat my food, hoping the next chapter's also good, the Deathstick is made of Elder wood...
Logan 2008-09-16 ch 17, anon.	abuseHey! Whats up? Long time no see. Hope you had a good trip. Love the new chappie! I have an idea for your story if this works for next chappie or the next after that one. Jeremy trap Natalie and the djinn and use a halfers hpnotic powers( have Jeremy kiddnap so Natalie and djinn could fall for trap you can give the halfer a name) to control Natalie, to make Natalie use the djinn to take over the world with Jeremy etc. etc. If the idea's any good I'm okay with stories tell me.Post the new chappie soon! Logan An Official Fan
xDrEaMeRx4xEVA 2008-09-16 ch 17,	abuseWOP another chapter!! XD hm contrustive criticism eh? Well...i don't know what really needs to be changed or improved...hm...maybe do this chapter in Natalie's pov...that would be cool XD
LM1991 2008-09-16 ch 17,	abuseUhoh, Natalie's almost a Mary-Sue! Keep her in check! It's not really bad, but a Mary-Sue's always annoying. (I see a Mary-Sue like a girl who can do most things, and seduce most guys... So I guess I've got a hell of a LOT Mary-Sues in my school XD) The chapter's fine, keep it up like this! Tell Natalie to kick Jeremy where the sun doesn't shine for me! Bye, Lisette
Logan 2008-08-09 ch 16, anon.	abuseUpdate soon okay Logan P.S. I have got an idea for a further chapter if you could e-mail me about it that would be great!
Polly Danderfluff-Mrs. Hawk... 2008-07-07 ch 16,	abuseAnother great chapter. I loved it! I can't wait until the next chapter comes. I wan to see what Jeremy has them do to start his army. PD-Mrs. H
LM1991 2008-07-02 ch 16,	abusecheers for Natalie You go, girl! Keep hitting the idiot! Anyway, it's a great chapter ^^. I'm waiting for your update! Bye, Lisette
Logan 2008-07-01 ch 16, anon.	abuseGreat chapter! Continue with Natalie hitting/punching/kicking Jeremy etc. Man I guess I can't keep coming to my computer hoping for an update. Have fun on your vacation. I just want to let you know I'm putting this fanfic up with The Forbbiden Heir and Gregor and the Gliders as my top 10 fanfics! See you in September! Don't worry I'll keep reviewing!
mnh72 2008-06-25 ch 15,	abusegreat story just got signed up and your story was the first one I read. Very well written and keeps the reader engaged throughout the story can not wait till the next chapter. keep up the great work.
Logan 2008-06-20 ch 15, anon.	abuseWow! Big shock there. I'm glad Natalie finally managed toture Jeremy he is such a bastard/dirty pervert! Can't wait for the next chappie.
LM1991 2008-06-19 ch 15,	abuseI love your new chapter ^^. I want to smack Jeremy... smacks Please update soon! Bye, Lisette
Crystal 2008-06-18 ch 15, anon.	abuseActually yes, it's xDrEaMeRx4xEVA i have a story on, please read it!! Great chap. when i saw u updated i squealed, my brother was like, "What was that?" Lol!
x-Vampire-Pheonix-x 2008-06-10 ch 14,	abuseYay! This story is so good. Please update soon! And read some of my stories... well... Future stories that are not yet written... 0.0 V.P (AKA Hannah, I finally got an account!)

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