| Reviews for Déjà Vu |
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the curious incident 12/7/09 . chapter 3A totally unpredictable and perfect almost-ending, that last bit brought it to the end of the chapter and lightened the mood with the joke, another clever device. Ahh, who doesn't love a Sasuke Uchiha full of raw emotion? I know Sakura doesn't -suggestive waggling of eyebrows- They have such chemistry. I can't seem to find any more words to say how much I love you and your writing and the way you capture the relationship of Sakura and Sasuke so I'll just leave it there. All your readers are going to be suffering until you post up Deja Vu, I hope you know that and keep it in mind when you are off procrastinating or you know, having a life but please spare a thought for those that don't and are waiting for there next fantasticle SasuSaku moment. ;D |
the curious incident 12/7/09 . chapter 2I absolutely love your battles, it's hard work, and I don't really speak from experience but I have tried xD, writing out a full-on fight scene and keeping it realistic and not making anyone too powerful and you did a wonderful job. You ARE wonderful. The thing with Sakura not being able to have children is really smart, to make Sasuke choose and all that. I think one of the best things about your writing is the ability to make Sasuke seem human with emotions and real love for Sakura underneath his cold facade and while I still think it is a pathetic excuse he didn't go after Sakura becasue he thought that 'she moved on' and he couldn't bear some crying when the love of his life was suffering knowing that she wasn't going to make him choose between her or her clan, you put into words the humanity and complexity of Sasuke that Masashi Kishimoto can't through manga. :) |
the curious incident 12/7/09 . chapter 1Holy crap you are one amazing author. I was just reading Color Theory and decided I HAD to look at all your other stories and boy I'm glad I did. You are just freaking amazing at writing SasuSaku, I swear you must be one of the best authors in Naruto fanfiction. Every single bit of it is so realistic you could imagine it happening in canon if Sasuke didn't have all his retarded issues. You write with such meticulous detail to everything and the way you portray your characters is wow - I could just ramble of more synonymous words of fantabulous. extraordinary. I am so glad I found you so I can read more of your fics, I cannot wait. ;D |
Lila Paige Rose 12/5/09 . chapter 3kya 3 Where's the epilogue! T_T im so hooked! XD |
AdotD 10/8/09 . chapter 3Aww I though this fic was a oneshot! The first chapter was good enough as it is. BUT, it worked well with the rest of these chapters. Thank you. :) |
AdotD 10/8/09 . chapter 1SO good. SO good that I actually teared up a little. Man oh man. |
Kaylathebookthief 9/22/09 . chapter 3Aw! So cute! Plz update! |
xStarryyAngellx 8/17/09 . chapter 3lol...please update soon! and for fuck's sake (excuse language) sasuke, u should've just proposed to her...then she'd have been crying tears of happiness |
o0Hate0o 8/12/09 . chapter 3 I know it's been like over an year since you last updated, but I really love this story. I really hope you'll update. D: Please & Thank-You - Abby. [: |
JollyVenturer 7/24/09 . chapter 3AH! that was wonderful! i absolutely love reading your Sasuke/Sakura fics. you got them pegged down :D annd oh! i was so ready to click that non-existant "next" button xD did u write the epilogue already and i just missed it, or have you not got around to that yet? |
soulberry 7/24/09 . chapter 3 oh my god . their problem was so complex and the resolution was so unpredictable . lol . i thought that they would cause a scene in the village . you know , drama here and drama there . . and i love sasuke in this chapter! yeah and he even got jealous! *sigh* they're a fool in love . . lol . and the epilogue , please? |
darkreverie13 7/9/09 . chapter 3is this the last chapter? |
konnichiha yoshi-chan 6/5/09 . chapter 3aw this is soo good and at the end funny please continue |
Shubhs 4/14/09 . chapter 3LOVE the story!;) :) XD :P |
Nothingbutblue 3/13/09 . chapter 3 Great story! :) |