 Hime-koi 2009-11-09 . chapter 1My first SakuraxRider story and I ended up favoriting it. XD |
 DreamShadower 2009-07-20 . chapter 10.o That. was. AWESOME! This is a piece I'm going to love reading over and over again. I must Fav for me. =3
I liked hearing Rider's view on her real master and her 'other' one. You did an excellent job capturing the mood and emotions in this. :3
Review claim for a Sexy Rider! |
 Nagisa-Aoi 2009-02-25 . chapter 1I...LOVE...this story!
Rider/Sakura is hot and so was this fic.
XD |
 Loveless 2009-01-03 . chapter 1 Sakura and Rider! Love the story. |
 DariusXXI 2008-12-10 . chapter 1I don't have words for this, it's just so perfect! Great job, will be reading you. |
 MishaRose22 2008-12-03 . chapter 1Absolutely beautiful! There definately are NOT enough RiderxSakura fics out there. |
 misssolid 2008-11-30 . chapter 1 OH MY GOD I'll defenitly need plenty of cold showers for reading you fic!
there aren't many fics that have this pairing so i REALLY REALLY loved reading this
it was both vveerryy hot and touching in their dialouge
you should've gotten many more reviews!you deserve them!
you rock my socks off XD |
 Alucard180 2008-11-13 . chapter 1wow
i dislike songfic's but, yours is the best I have seen.
there is nothing bad i can say about this
please write more |
 Alphawolf69 2008-09-13 . chapter 1I usually don't like (or more accurately, actively dislike) stories with song text in between lines, and/or ones that are so explicitly erotic. I've got to say this is one of the few exceptions to those rules. The characterisation was nicely handled and I liked hearing Rider's thoughts on how her 'real' Master was usurped. I think these two work great as a couple (makes me wish someone would write an AU story where Sakura never gets the command seals taken off her) and you showed that very well. |
 Kagero64 2008-06-25 . chapter 1This was amazing!
Really hot stuff, I encourage you to write more. |
 XIII Trinity 2008-06-21 . chapter 1Jesus christ, I almost made a mess on my monitor >_> |
 Kamikaze Wraith 2008-05-05 . chapter 1Sweet f uck!*
While I don't particularly care for songfics, the promise of the pairing made me delve further into this piece.
I couldn't be more glad I did. A delicious work, my friend. Though I can't say I condone your taste in music, your writing was top notch, and the lemon was most fap-worthy.
With my most exuberant congratulations,
-KW
P.S.
By the way, you should consider uploading this to another, less censored fic archive like or ficwad, if you haven't done so already. This would prevent the loss of this story from the internet if a troll/angry yaoi fangirl stumbled upon it and reported it.
*Pun not intended. |
 EleCoR 2008-04-23 . chapter 1I was expecting that Rider would use her acrobatic techniques during the session.. XD |
 List of Romantics 2008-04-20 . chapter 1Delicious!
THAT. WAS. Awesome! Sakura's innocence and Rider's chaotic goodness and sultry, vixen nature; your story played these two perfectly! It was sensual and passionate with undertones of regret and a deep longing; the one thing you want most you can't have... at least as you would have liked.
Sakura plays Rider's Sugar perfectly: sweet, unadulterated and pure, there is no subterfuge. Rider brings the boldness and flavor, Sakura's Spice: a woman of experience who knows both the pains and pleasure in life, sultry, thrilling and dangerous. They are, for each other, what gives meaning to their continued existence. (A tad corny of me, I know)
Personally, I found the show average but lord help me, I have a powerful weakness for women, especially the "Evil" or Bad Girl. I was thrilled to see I wasn't the only person to recognize Rider's sapphic brilliance.
Most Satisfactory! Well written and thoroughly enjoyed!
I'd really dig reading another Rider/Sakura or Rider/Rin or Saber. |
 xRheinx 2008-04-10 . chapter 1Its cool... yet hot... I like the scenes, very very hot, your fanfic need more review >=D
Besides you deserved it, you did a good job at it =D |