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CARI 2008-04-27 ch 3, anon.	abuseHOW COULD SHE BE MEEAN TO DEAN!? NO! ROWR!
lovinandrew 2008-03-13 ch 1,	abuseHey Just read this story, Carol showed it to me knowing how much I'm obssessed with John lol and i gotta say i enjoyed it very much. Sam was just adorable * boogerhead* lmao Poor Dean cant get a break and of course John fixing the problem, No-one touches his kids Enjoyed it muchly thanks :)
LovinJackson 2008-03-02 ch 3,	abuseThat was painful to read but ohh so very well written!! John, Dean and little Sammy were all perfect and I loved that Miss Andrea told John and I'm glad John done what he had. Excellent, excellent piece my friend!! Tara x0x
Nvrmore 2008-03-02 ch 3,	abuseAhh Papa Bear!! Oo. I like Miss Andrea and her line of reasoning - "I don’t know what kind of evil, but it doesn’t really matter now does it? Not when it comes to kids." - Amen, sister. Ah, Johnny boy. Nice work with the 'suicide.' Kind of scary really. And excellent acting with the principal. Oh nice - "Damn that bitch straight to hell! “Already done Dean,” " - Don't know if you meant the timing on that, but it was perfect. What am I saying - of course you did you Rembrandt, you. :) (I love Bumblebee, too. He's my favorite!) “He actually played with Sammy at the park the other day instead of just sitting on the swings. And the night before last...” he breathed shakily, “He laughed,” - Wow! That is a testimony to how bad off he was. And how sad for John, too. But horay (or oo-rah) the witch is dead, the wicked old witch is dead - and salted and burned and she ain't coming back. Awesome! Nicely done. All the way around. Kudos lady. Kudos.
Nvrmore 2008-03-02 ch 2,	abuseHa ha. Love Sam's attention span. So glad Freddie was brave enough to go get someone! Aww. that was such a good ending for that chapter. Woo. Spellbinding. Okay... on to chapter 3. (squee! and aweseome!)
Nvrmore 2008-03-02 ch 1,	abuseI totally brain-farted. For some reason, I saw ch 2 posted and I thought, well, I'll just wait until 3 is posted, too, and then read it all at once. That was...when? I didn't realize 3 had been posted (yes the alert is in my mailbox, but I had one of those brain short-circuit issues)... anyway, all that to say: Sorry I'm late reviewing (am so looking forward to this). But here I am. "his words and voice were clipped in a way that Sam wasn’t familiar with, yet." - what an interesting comment. I love the paragraph about Sam doing Deans chores and not wanting Dean to get yelled at for what he always did right. That is so awesome. You can really feel the wedge that has already been shoved between Sam and John in direct comparison to Sam thinking altruistically about Dean which, for a kid Sam's age, is pretty good. I like how the boys work together. Dean thinks to take the milk money. Sam writes the note. Love Dean's poor misguided attempt to keep things easy for John. Dean, the human buffer - absorb as much as possible so John doesn't have to deal. O... One word - be-atch! Wench (okay, that was two. I'm sure I could come up with more... but I'll move on to ch 2 instead. :D ).
SamDeanLover28 2008-03-01 ch 3,	abuseaw that was brilliant loved it. I roccmended you're fic t oa friend of mine at the CW Lounge so she could read it too. Talk to you soon ~SDL~
Nana56 2008-02-29 ch 3,	abuseOh, thank you! That was awesome! I loved it! Time to learn hand-to-hand...I guess. I love John and he did exactly what he should have done under those circumstances. I admire his restraint, however. I might have done more, but I do understand the need to make it look like suicide. A good man! My poor little boy! The stuff of nightmares! Well done, as always, my dear!
banana4dean 2008-02-29 ch 3,	abuseHi Sifi! Nice wrap up. I'm sad that it ends so quickly, but weechester fics tend to be too short for me. I like the omnimous saying at the end " dark times are coming..." Is it a hint for a sequel? Hee. Just my opinion, but the ending tone is a bit detach from the first 2 chapters. This chapter's focus is more about John, and I sort of miss a conclusion for Dean and Sam...especially Dean with what he had to endure. Look forward to more of your writing :)
afanfromSicily 2008-02-29 ch 3,	abuseClap! Clap! Clap! Ornella is clapping and is smiling, very pleased, at the screen That bi... ehm, big bad monster got she deserved! Well, not exactly. She deserved to be terrified like Dean and the other children, to be broken like them, to suffer like them. Her death had been too quick, too merciful. I'm afraid I'm still a little mad at that bit... bitter big bad monster. I'm glad miss Andrea told John. He needed to know and not only to waste that thing but above all to understand better his son and help him. And, like John, I'm proud of little Sammy. He did all the riht things. e kept, relatively, calm when Dean got hurt and called Miss Andrea. Good move, boy! Then, he lied to John giving us a glimpse of the tight bond that'll accompany the two brothers for their whole life. Awesome job, sifi. Ornella
renniespice 2008-02-29 ch 3,	abuseStill enjoying it!I look forward to the next update!
CatBeist 2008-02-29 ch 3,	abuseWhy didn’t he tell me!? All that sleeping? All those baths... oh my GOD it all makes sense now, why didn’t I see? You know... if I look at this story as a stand alone, and I know it isn't but it is inn a way. You know what I love? That inn this story, the first two chapters you kinda portray John as slightly selfish and preoccupied. Not mean or anything but as we kinda know him, not much around, the drinking... and even though he knows something is up with Dean he leaves Sam to find it out... Well I love how when John is told what has happened that you have him show so much emotion. I mean I know we both agree much on how we think John was to them and you do stay true to that on both good and bad, you just manage to show both sides inn such a short story! Oh I was going to say now it is time for John to get his game-face on and visit MissKetchup. I do have to wonder though... did John kill her? I don't want him to have done so, but I can see that he might Would and he is definitely capable of doing so... But did he? Can we? Can I stay up too? I’ll go take a nap too if I can stay up and have a guys night out... can we? C’Mon Dean? Please?” he asked. Lol that boy doesn't even wait for an answer does he... lol and so excited he sounds :) I can just see that face and those eyes and being so excited to get a 'guys night' It is sad that John can't tell his boy that he knows, that it is okay, and that he should be able to tell his dad everything. And also since we got Sam questioning John too... Would be good to see the little runt have it confirmed how much John cared you know. Who is he talking too? Missoury? (spelling ain't my thing today)... Hmm... if not her then who? Man this was another good one sifi! You bring up a lot of good points not just tied to this story but for all the time after, I am sure I could have speculated bundles inn this and how just the stay they had inn this place could alter all 3 of the winchesters. Great story sifi! :D
lblficwriter 2008-02-29 ch 3,	abuseOmg that was beautiful. I was actualy crying when it was talking about the pictures. That was great. Thanks for writing.
sunnyjunedays 2008-02-29 ch 3,	abuseHi, Great ending to this story, does this mean this will be continued in a follow up or is that just my wishful thinking? John surely did not disappoint with his actions, i knew he'd never let his sons down. Loved it. x
Megan Casady 2008-02-29 ch 3,	abuseAw! :-) hugs sifi Awesome job! Seriously. I gotta admit, I was really glad that John took care of the problem - she deserved it! Oh, and "Get t'writing, you fugly bitch" - LMAO! And Sammy telling John what he'd found out was so sweet. He kept BOTH his promises to Dean and to John without breaking either. Perfect! So at the end, was that Miss Andrea? I just woke up, so my brain's not running at top speed yet. LOL

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