Hey!!
I love it! I think its a really start! please continue!! I cant wait to her whats going to happen next!! I think you have really managed to capture the character of Malcom very good! Im a big Josh Groban fan too so Im practically addicted to fanfiction about him!! So good job and please keep on writing!

Hey I thought it was sweet. Malcolm is a great character to expand on. I'll be looking for more.