** should have just bit her ** right then and there. It would have started the change. For ** sakes woman. Update! lol Please!

I think I feel that same change in the winds. I'm so happy that maybe Edward will finally see that Bella loves him as much as he loves her. Vampire or no vampire. I'm truly glad you've stayed true to the books in this aspect. That, yes of course, Edward wants an eternity with Bella, but hes hesistant, because he thinks she'll grow to hate him. That Bella doesn't understand what she's asking when she say's 'forever'.

Great chapter :)

Oh! What the ** Renee. That woman pulled a fast ** one on our asses...

*Does the happy dance*

Is it sad to want Jacob to come in and TRY to screw it up? I always want that... just so we can shove the "haha, not gonna work - Edward and Bella belong together" in his face...

Lmfao. "I've always had a thing for vampires..." Well **! Don't we all!?

I like this chapter, but wouldn't Edward take her to the hospital??

That was awesome! And weird! It was something Edward would so do... you know? Like, he'd avoid the ** out of her like he did Twilight and then suddenly come around ...and it leaves all of us rather puzzled :)

Well that my dear, was quite interesting. And kind of hot... in a weird way? :) I see you updated last in July. Hopefully you will again soon, because now I have a feeling I will start reading this until the break of dawn...

Amazing first chapter!

awesome

Horrible, just horrible. I take back all the nice things I said.

OK, you really earned another review, this is such a fun story. I am really enjoying it like no other. I have read a bunch of the AU stories recently but the ones I have read so far are not nearly so clever as yours!

W-O-W! "have you told her yet that you're a vampire"
Just awesome! Thank you so much for sharing this story, this is a really amazing AU!

mike newton is a creep-o-saurus hope he dies.

You asked about title choices, going with what you chose, is good. But I suggest you rename it "You Are Going To Love This Story! It Is The Best AU Story Ever!"

Please, please update!

I just love this story and need to know more! You have really captured the essence of Bella and Edward, and brought them to life. I have fallen deeper in love with your Edward, than I did with the canon Edward. And that's saying something! :-)

So, please, please update soon! I'm on my knees, begging... I'll even find some vampire-proof rope for you...please?