Very nicely done!

Nice plot of the story. :)

Anymore?

As ever with you stories, the idea was extremely original and the characterisations perfect. Keep up the good work, I look forward to seeing how you continue this.

i love this story so far, hope you update soon

Hey - I found this on LJ but had to review here so I could actually keep track of it. The way you write Dudley is so PERFECT - I mean, he had to grow up sometime, but he still keeps some attributes (like the computer/TV thing) from his childhood. And the conversation with Harry is beautifully awkward. And I can't wait to see how you write Percy, since Percy is made of win.

I do hope you plan on continuing this. :]

Very good. It's nice to see Duds as a human being, and not a cartoon. I hope you continue it.

Good fic, I really enjoyed this chapter, the grittiness of the characters, and such. Please update soon.

wicked. finally a story with a unique pairing and normal human situation.

hm, intriguing so far, i don't think i've read many fics with dudley as a main character, and nothing like this. can't wait to see what you're cooking up - i await the next installment!
skinnyrita

I loved the idea and I love the wy the story starts to turn out. The characterisations are wonderful, they make so much sense to me. Your writing style fits perfectly - it doesn't make this into anything remotely sappy or pathetic. The scene where Dudley cooks the first dinner nearly made me cry anyway.
You're the first person who has ever made me like and understand Dudley. Harry's POV is rather helpful there.
Mrs. Figg is lovely. So is the idea of Harry and Luna being married.
Got no words for the talk between Harry and Dudley - it's so awkward, and so them, and I love that Harry asks him to be an uncle and to come to dinner. That offer of getting to know each other. Perfect. So much in there. NOt that this should be surprise me in a story of yours ;)
Happily awaiting part two.