A crossover with the Matrix... you go! Tell me, will there be agents and doors leading to different locations there? Wanna see if they use their partners in fights.

that's... deepish. ru trying to copy EVERYTHIGN from teh matrix? *shakes head* dont even try

Ok, lyr. Dear sister. Enough is enough. You WILL write more or i shall be
forced to TP your house o-o,
Jane, Keli

This is an interesting story the concept is cool, though -ah- heh heh, I find it a little hard to understand...probly coz I've never seen the Matrix, lol .

it is an excellent story so far... please post chp. 3 soon!

Lyr lyr you've done it again. I love your writing.

Fantastic fic, and as I said before, YER A BRILLIANT FIC WRITER! And plz try to write&post the next chapter ASAP! Keep up the good work

This story is getting interesting. I will be watching for what comes next. Nice story.

Very impressive. A 03 Matrix crossover. Very well written. I hope to see more of your work.

Archangel

What an interesting concept! And one. I think, that's supported just a little by 03 itself. Just listen for those Matrix sound-bites every time that computer headquarters is shown. Who else can we expect to see here, I wonder?