Not the ending I expected, but I loved it all the same. Thanks for writing so many brilliant fanfics!

did draco die?

I like your storyline the concept is good and has potential to be a tearjerker. But I'd really advise you to expand your story because in so few words, you are unable to convey the true tragedy of Draco's death. You spend most of the story describing how their relationship happened (that's a good length), but only spend 2 small paragraphs on the pivotal moment of the final battle. If you just expand that section and make it more indepth and emotional, you could have a really good tearjerker. However, as of now, I see the potential and the good story line, but I don't have enough time to really get into the story. But good going anyways.)

Naww, now usually I don't read Hermione/Draco but I found this cute, even if he didn't survive at the end. I love the last line even though it's sad.

Very good.

?Planning a sequal?

ohh it was really sad the end...I was hoping he would come...

Maybe a next chap?... :p

oh jees... I'm almost crying now. That was so very sad, and so very sweet in a strange, morbid way. Loved it anyway, even though I might be properly crying soon.

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