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Sailormoonloverlol
2008-07-02
ch 3,
abuselu vit!
x.X.x.X.xBabyboo294x.X.x.X....
2008-05-09
ch 3,
abuseTHat wa sfunny!!
xx-Chocolat-chama-xx
2008-03-21
ch 3,
abusesweet... i lyk it. maybe if i let my guy cousing read it he'd learn a lesson and stop sneaking up on us. he doesn't really know i know. i also dont know why i'm writing these things.
awesome story! ;)
aburamesora
2008-03-11
ch 3,
abuseHahahahah!-can't stop laughing -
EXTREMELY FUNNY!
Vikings love Ranch
2008-03-10
ch 3,
abusetwa...

twaha...

TWAH AHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

THE GIRLS ARE AWESOME!

... i did see some spelling mistakes (i used to make em all the time... USED to... THEN MY DTUPID COUSIN DELETED ALL OF THEM! RAWR! GAH! SHE HATES ME, BUT NO ONE EVER NOTICES... maybe im just being paranoid... wait... SHE DELETED MY STOPRIES! ... okay, before i go into super rant mode, im gonna stop...)

you get cheese st ix! YOU CAN TEAR THEM AND USE THEM AS CONFETTI! ... but make shure you clean them up... it isn't good to have rotten cheese stick remains in your room...

don't update, and i shall send my perverted/horny dog to hummp your leg! ( i swear! one time meh friend commented on his butt, and started scratching it ((it IS cute)) and then he got HARD!...my friend now calls him my minion perve, because im a perve around Kiba...)

CHYEAH! VIKINGS ARE AWESOME!
kyo12591
2008-03-10
ch 3,
abuselol interesting every guys nightmear to go shopping lol

kyo
xHinax
2008-03-10
ch 3,
abuseZOMFGHFRFRGUB!
Okay, that was completly useless. -.-"
AWESOME JOB! I LOVED IT! DATTEBAYO~! *Lee smile*

Keep up the awesome work~! =3

~Saku-chan~
Pandastacia
2008-03-10
ch 3,
abuselol. Seriously. What girl would like a stalker? -shivers- HAHAHAHA! You guys got beat BAD!
PiecesHateScorpios
2008-03-10
ch 3,
abuselol
*sasuke* *twitch* evil... girls... EVIL I TELL YOU!
*me* O.o sasuke just said a sentence!! sorta...
AWESOME last chapter!! loved the story!
xXdarkblossomXx
2008-03-10
ch 3,
abuseHaha, the guys finally got caught. Nice story, I liked it.
alayneni
2008-03-10
ch 3,
abuseGreat story!
sasusaku0129
2008-03-10
ch 3,
abuselol this was funny awsoem i loved it
NaruHinaforever
2008-03-08
ch 2,
abusefunny chapter
SasuSaku Forever and Ever
2008-03-07
ch 2,
abuseLOL THATS SO FUNNY CONTINUE SOON!
xXdarkblossomXx
2008-03-07
ch 2,
abuseLOL. I really liked this chapter. I like the story so far, please update soon!
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