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SistersGrimm
2008-07-24
ch 36,
abuseOMG, OMG, OMG, OMG! I had finally let out a breath with this story and you make Inu and Fluffy disappear! Are you trying to give me a heart attack?! But whoa! What a chappie! :3
karei uchiha
2008-07-08
ch 35,
abusewow, its been really great. this has been amazing and i'm sad to see it end. i saw the youtube video, by the way, its really great!
Bluemoon4526
2008-07-08
ch 35,
abuseYay! Miserys' not dead anymore! Asome story, I'll have to start printing and binding some of this stories there just way to good to be confined to the computer screen. More, more... come on there should be more... OK fine I'll wait. Later.
LadyCash
2008-07-08
ch 35,
abuseVery nicely done!
I love the intensity of battle here, the desperation.

So glad to see Misery get her own back, it's about time!
Glad also that she and Sess got their happy ending as well.

I'll miss this when it's done, it can be hard finding a
story with the proper amounts of angst and emotion, still
coupled with a great plot. It's been quite the story, for
all of us. Love ya sweetie!
SistersGrimm
2008-07-07
ch 35,
abuseYAY! I'm doing my little happy dance!! YAY!
catbaker
2008-07-07
ch 35,
abuse*Clapping wildly* That was one helluva final battle! I can't even begin to describe the emotions I'm feeling right now...my heart is still pounding, and the way Misery's spirit fought to return to help Kagome was magnificent!! The fact that she was able to return to her corporeal body again, and deliver the final blows to her arch-nemisis was a stroke of brilliance...and when sesshy shed that tear, so did I! I am saddened that this wonderful story is coming to a close, but you should truly be proud of the work you have done!
catbaker
2008-06-26
ch 34,
abuseARG! you and these evil cliffies will be the death of me! This was possibly the best chapter so far! The emotional intensity displayed by each of the characters had my heart thumping and Misery's last "words" to Kagome had tears welling in my eyes! I whole heartedly agree with Inuyasha...when will the jewel have enough? This group has endured more tragidy than they ever deserved, and it doesn't seem to be letting up at all...and your evil hints that Sesshy will join his mate are infuriating! It leaves me to wonder if Midoriko will somehow make things right for these two wonderful characters in the end...I'm still a sucker for happy endings! The only thing that could have possibly made this chapter better was if Sesshomaru had shed just one solitary tear...the whining and whimpers were effective, but just that one tear would probably have pushed me over the edge! I can't wait for the next installment!
SistersGrimm
2008-06-25
ch 34,
abuseThere has to be some way to bring Misery back! Please!! And please don't kill Fluffy or any of the others! Ah! I'm like agonizing over the ending here!
Bluemoon4526
2008-06-25
ch 34,
abuseWow, that is some thing I would love to see animated, specialy the ending of this chapter. It was completely asome.

But wait why didn't the Tensaiga work, why is Misery still in the land of the dead, will Sesshomaru really loose his love so soon after meeting her, it's not fair. Please don't tell me this is going to be a tragedy, I hate tragedies.

By the way I still can't get over the irony of her name, you did do that on porpose right??

More, please. Sayunara.
catbaker
2008-06-18
ch 33,
abuseACK! Evil, EVIL cliffie!

This was a supurb chapter that leaves me drooling for more! The intense emotion didn't let up throughout, and I giggled with delight at the return of our fave stoic Sesshy! I can't help but wonder, if she dies by Kagome's hands, will the Tensaiga bring her back, freed from the bastards spell?

what can I say, I'm a sucker for happy endings...
Bluemoon4526
2008-06-17
ch 33,
abuseI just read all 33 chapters in about 24hrs didn't even stop to sleep although my body begges me to go to bed all ready, they where that good though I have to admit that I'm not very happy with you as I don't really like waiting for the next chapter witch is why I opt for completed stories most of the time, but it was simply fantastic, now please I'm begging you update like now! One of the only complains I have is that for some reason that I don't really care to understand you keep using came instead of come. Well that's it for my ramblings, later!
Michelle Weasley Fenton
2008-06-01
ch 32,
abuseo no! Not good!! bad very bad!
SistersGrimm
2008-05-30
ch 32,
abuseDun, dun, dun! So it begins! Oh this is awesome!! I love cliffhangers!!
LadyCash
2008-05-30
ch 32,
abuseWow, drama all over the board this time out!

Love that Inu got his ears back, and in such a tender, loving
scene, too. But what a swing with the taking of the jewel!

Reading this sometimes like a roller coaster, I can't imagine
living it! (very good job)
catbaker
2008-05-30
ch 32,
abuseOh poor Sesshy!! he finally gets to offically mate with Misery, and now she's back under that bastards control!

This was a really great chapter! the emotions had me gripped from beginning to end!! I can't wait to see how this plays out!
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