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| standbyme406 2008-05-01 ch 2,  | abusewhat test!? ha update! |
| Tusk Of Thyme 2008-04-28 ch 2, | abuseThe grammar is much better in this chapter! It also keeps the reader in suspense which is great! Just tell me if you need anything else ^-^ Peace |
| DefLeppardFan 2008-04-27 ch 2, | abuseWoah. What kind of "Test" are they talking about? ohh the suspence! update soon! |
| Winchester love pie 2008-03-13 ch 1, | abuseThis is really interesting and original, :D I'm looking foward to reading more. Hope you update as soon as you can. ~Katyx |
| Nightcrawlerlover 2008-03-03 ch 1, | abuseOoh, the drama and suspense builds! Keep up the good work. |
| DefLeppardFan 2008-02-28 ch 1, | abuseAh, Hm, Tehe, Oh my, alright, Well I Love it! : ) Keep going please! Oh and one more thing snicker WILY! |
| standbyme406 2008-02-28 ch 1, | abusegood chapter! wonder whats gonna happen with this black car... |
| Tusk Of Thyme 2008-02-27 ch 1, | abuseHey! I like it! The only thing I would suggest is to check your grammar, it would really help in adding flow to the story, I can help you with that if you want. Keep it up! |