Reviews for Once Upon a Golden Afternoon

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Alice-In-Wonderland101 2008-07-14 ch 5,	abuseOME million times continue I love this story with all my heart (though was a little confused by parts in this chapter) I fell in love with Alice in Wonderland now im falling in love with this. Beautifully done. Alice
Vampire Kid Kara 2008-07-09 ch 5,	abuseoh I love this! Please continue! It's so original! I love the part with the chimney sweeps singing on the roof haha. And you explore Alice's mind very well. Please continue!
Shade rose 2008-07-07 ch 5,	abuseOh, please do continue with this story! I can't wait to find out how long it will be untill Alice realizes the paralels between her life and Wonderland!
Lady Charity 2008-07-07 ch 5,	abuseI absolutely adore your description. It's so vivid I could picture it perfectly. I like how you developed the characters. Poor Alice. I would love it if you continued, this story is so lovely.
InvisibleOrphan 2008-07-03 ch 5,	abusePlease continue. I enjoy reading what your write. :]
KamiDarko 2008-07-03 ch 5,	abuseThe best part of reading something like this is you can find images of the characters that match the ntinue? [yes] or [no]? ^
The Mad Maiden 2008-07-02 ch 5,	abuseThis is getting really interesting. I do so hope you will continue it!
Mandy 2008-07-01 ch 5, anon.	abuseI'm enjoying this little story so far!It's different from any other I've found.Please keep it up! I'm interested to see if/how Alice gets back to her old imaginative self!
ZanzaGirl 2008-06-30 ch 5,	abusePlease, continue. I like it so far.
I Follwed The White Rabbit 2008-06-30 ch 5,	abuseI'm so happy! I love this story. It kind of reminds me of a book I read once. It was about the daughter of a...a... well, it starts with a "C". Can't wait for the update!
madmaggie 2008-06-30 ch 5, anon.	abusegood job! Please continue!
Leigh A. Sumpter 2008-06-29 ch 5,	abuseYay for new friends! Great chapter... I'm so glad she made a friend. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Alexa Twitch 2008-06-29 ch 5,	abusePlease continue. It's a lovely story.
FullmetalFreak7 2008-06-29 ch 5,	abuseI'm really glad I found your story! I just got done reading all of your chapters, and I found all of them, very well done and captivating! Your chapters were well detailed and your grammar/spelling is great. Your characters sound in character to me. I love how you incorporate the Wonderland characters into your story. It adds a very nice touch. My only problem, is that your chapters are short... I wish they were longer, so I can be entertained longer. So far, a very nice story!
lily 2008-06-29 ch 5, anon.	abuseKEEP GOING! stop mking me worried that you're going to stop writing this stroy at the end of every chapter with that ominous "continue or no?" well, who cares what everyone else thinks, it is really up to you. and if you DO care, then continue! please? pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease? Oh, one question though. Why do they call Alice "Miss Pleasance" when he last name was really Liddell? (her middle name was pleasance, though). just wondering. but it is good so far, can't wait to read more!

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