Good work.

*bawling* Poor Yuriy, poor Boris, poor butterfly... *waterfall*

Oh...that was so pretty. Thanks so much for writing that. I love butterflies, and I love Yuriy and Boris, so...that was perfect for them. Bittersweet, with a really nice ending. The rhythm of this story was great. ^^

Well, I certainly have to admit, you effectively killed the moment you had there with them dreaming about butterflies, by having Yuriy just rip it apart like that. I really enjoyed this story, I liked how you used the butterflies as their hope for something better in life, and I really liked how you captured their pain. I also really like a well written Abbey story, you don't really see alot of them anymore. Truy amazing.

God...
Gosh that was good...REally. A godd well done!

i loved it, although i did not understood what happened with Yuriy :(

Aha, I see you've already added your own story. lulz.

So, this, by far, was my favorite sentence (besides they're hands slowly creeping together...absolutely adorable)

Yuriy and Boris weren’t friends (those weren’t allowed), but they shared the same kind of past and the same kind of training and the same kind of thoughts. This was partnership.

I love the idea behind it. Friendship. What's that? So beautiful. I felt just awe from those words.

I'm so glad you wrote a second entry; it's as beautiful as a butterfly's wings.