I remember reading part of this on KMC. Did you get anymore written?

This story is so funny! You need to update though. Seriously. Don't worry about sparrabeth flamers, they're all off their heads. Update! You know really want to. ;D

We need to get DMC finished, Kate! I miss you on KMC. Come back and let's do the scene we've been dying to do since we decided to do this whole project. You know what I'm talking about!

UPDATE!

Willabeth? This is willabeth. I'll throw up now. That's so disgusting. I read a *beep* willabeth story. EW!
SO dissappointed. I feel so sick...

"Looks like you two are over-dressed for the occasion." - ohh my sentiments exactly ^^

I loved Jack/Gibbs' banter over the map! That was brilliant!

And I loved "an ominous ceiling fan" LOL

"Bill: It ain't that easy to get rid of me, mac." - yes... sadly, it seems to be true for the entire family...

"He picks up a small button that a person would pin onto their coat. It says, "Vote for Beckett."" - That's too perfect ^^ Loved it ^^

Wonderful chapter! Hilarious, as always ^^ This is SO GREAT! Can't wait for more!

Great job so far! Hillbillies. What good idea.

Please update soon!

DUDE! Thought I'd never see the day!! I'm so glad you put this up. This way were forced to write more...you sneaky thing! Can't wait for the next part

I absolutely love this story! It's a truly brilliant, FLAWLESS parody!

"Course, that does make the cars a little vulnerable, and your new roommate…" - I love what you do with all the movie lines ^^ It's such a joy & pleasure to read!!

"Suddenly, Pintel and Ragetti, dressed up like flappers with garters and all, walk into the midst of the fighting, waving feather boas." - I don't think I will be able to get this image out of my head anytime soon LOL

"Just keep in mind your pen is mightier than your sword." - haha I loved it! ^^

The end?? NO! I can't wait for DMC! This is AMAZING! I will be waiting IMPATIENTLY! :)

I love it! It's so brilliantly HILARIOUS!

"Elizabeth:(doesn't know what to do) Cigarette?" - Wonderful ^^

"Barbossa:(laughs) You slay me, kid. (turns to Jack) Is he tryin' to take after you?" - I loved the entire scene. The chase, Will's hand getting stuck. Very, very clever LOL Great!

"Elizabeth: But you’re the legendary mobster Jack Sparrow! You blackmailed the mayor in his own bathtub! You stole an entire fleet of booze without breaking a single law! Are you the mobster I’ve dreamed about or not?"" - that was wonderfully written!! I LOVED the forest (^^) scene! So creative.

And I LOVED the ending of this chapter! *swoons*

This is fantastic! ^^

"Liz… Liz Turner. I’m a singer at Tortuga Joe’s." - I love what you do with all the movie lines! They are all changed so brilliantly!

The Black Pearl is a car!! That's a LOVELY idea!

"David "the Squid" Jones." - ^^ I love how all the plot points fit together, how it all works with the Chicago setting. It's truly the best PotC parody EVER.

This part killed me ^^ : "Now, Will, when someone's pushed out of a plane, they can either land on land or in water, and the situation ain't good either way. / How did he survive? / Glad you asked! Jack, freefalling through the clouds, made the coo of a dove. (coos) All of a sudden, every bird of flight circled round him. He took hold of a couple of turkey vultures and they flew him to safety. / Turkey vultures?" - this is just too HILARIOUS for words ^^ I loved it!

"Will: I find the stories, (lunge)write the stories, (lunge) and print the stories! / Jack: You got to find yourself a girl...or at least a really nice car." - That was LOVELY! ^^

"Will: You cheated! / Jack: Mobster." - LOL

Detective Murtogg! That's TOO cute ^^

This is so wonderful and vivid! I can just see it all happening, see & hear all the characters.

omg I loved this: "Norrington: Mr. Turner, you're just a reporter, and a mediocre one at that. You're not a cop, you're not an informant. Now get out of here!"

I loved the Jack/Will scene! Hilarious!

Awesome story! :)

Oh my gosh! I loved the ending!! The kiss on the cheek was awesome! ^^

This is FABULOUS! What a ride! GREAT idea, fantastically written.

"...and I happen to have no dress in me car." - LOL Loved it! ^^

i love it so much.i'll go back to KMC and see.

Fantastic...and that song...just like in Casablanca.Hope it1s just as great love story...maybe a bit happier.