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I loved this story! Will you continue??
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aw that was so sweet! *sigh*

That was great. You are really descriptive and you have a great voice. You managed to capture the characters really well. Well done!

I loved this chapter, and your whole series for that matter!
I really liked how you didn't do the perdictable Edward/Bella New Moon, with Almost Lover.
A suggestion...I'd personally like to see Near To You soon.

Ugh, I didn't read all of this. Sorry. I can't stand Jacob and his interference.
Gah.
This would have been a nice song for steping over the border =)

You want suggestions? Why, why lol. You don't need them =).
It's seems like your finding all the "sweet spots" and re-editing them. I love it.

Wow, that was a very very good Edward One-Shot. It's exactly what he would be thinking, of course I only know from my lack of knowladge. It's kind of sad isn't it, how both of them seem to think that neither of them deserve eachother.
This hit a nerve with me, because that's how I reacted. I didn't get it at first, why Bella was upset. Then I realized why and I was shocked. I just sat there with my mouth open for a while. How horrid.

Adding and reviewing =D
Haha, I'm gonna check the album out now.
I liked it, but the meadow time was short. At least from reading POV. =)

A lot of fics that take a scene from the books and rewrite the POV just end up changing the pronouns and not really bringing anything new to the scene. This was faithful to the story and consistent with both Bella and Edward's characters, but still unique and new. Very well done!

ooh, a fine frenzy. i love her.
like an apple on a tree
hiding out behind the leaves
i was difficult to reach
but you picked me
yeah, you picked me.

do that one next please, love?
you picked me.

I like how Bella's thoughts are on Edward and not wandering. I liked her and Jacob's short conversation because you could tell that there was pain there.

I loved when Edward came home, a simple sweet reunion.

Great chapter, can't wait for the next one.

That was very sad, but I liked it.

I like how you went into how deep in despair Esme was and that you brought Carlisle into it with her thoughts.

Really great chapter.

The song went well with this chapter. I love how you have that part from Edwards POV. It was nice seeing it through his eyes, reading every movement, every statement from Bella in a million ways, and even though he's paying attention to her he's still aware of what's around.

Great job. I love this one.

Wow that was really good. I like how you went through the scene as simple as that, simple but something special to the two of them. You had Edward and Bella in character, which made it a great read.

It was very nice, I liked it a lot.