This was so incredibly beautiful. It was very abstract, but that, I think, only added to its beauty. The thought of Rinoa always wanting to dance, and the different ways this tied into what she said to other characters was lovely.

I'm not quite sure I understand, but this was beautiful. I love these things that give Rinoa some depth. Adding it to my favs:)

I don't quite understand what it is about this story that I find so beautiful because I don't actually understand what this story is about. It's confusing me... But I think it's a masterpiece. Strange.
Thank you for sharing it. :)

I adore fics like this. It's beautiful, gorgeous, both to look at and read. I still don't fully understand, but I'll give it a few more reads and finally I will.

At first glance, Rinoa's character comes off as nothing special above spitfire damsel, but it's writing, such as what I've read here, with such concise, yet gorgeously-detailed dialogue, memories, mindset, and character interaction (It's always grand when people give Seifer personality, though, I love how you managed to shine some spotlight on the main cast and Rin's family matters as well) that makes her stand out as a more complex and depthful person than one would suppose. :)

simply amazing . . .

i have no words for this peice. . .i'm still wondering if I "understand"

-Dead Pollen (adding to faves. . .)

Um, you made me love Rinoa all over again.

THANKYOU!

Very deep and poignant. I loved it. :] Great job!