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Nardaviel 2008-06-04 ch 1,	abuseOh... wow. For me, Death Note is such a tragic story because the entire thing is one instance after another of Kira hurting people and destroying their lives. The thing is, it's usually people who care about him, or with whom he could have formed some sort of relationship. This fic captures that beautifully. Soichiro's PoV is really well-done. It's a hard perspective to come by, and you executed it brilliantly. His perception of L's and Raito's relationship added another layer to the Kira-eats-people thing I was talking about earlier, and also broke me into little tiny pieces with the quiet hopelessness of it. So basically... you are amazing, and I'm going to go cry for L now.
Rin Cho 2008-04-01 ch 1, anon.	abusethis makes me really sad, and kinda irritated, with all the denial and self-preaching Soichiro does in here, but i can defiantly see it happening, which makes me even more sad. i caught onto to his last words too, and the way he's always rebuking L, bcuz if he wasn't suspicious, then why would he feel the need to repeatedly deny L's claim that Light's Kira? this is brilliant, i love how you expressed him in this. harrah, Nilah!
rndmprsnlily 2008-03-23 ch 1, anon.	abusewickedly good, thats wt i think :)
Anna Tramell 2008-03-08 ch 1,	abuseAh, I like that idea. I think my favourite sentence was the poetic use of "waltz" - but all the others developed in a interesting sort of fic. As I was reading, I found myself trying to guess what the premier challenge was. I think I figured it out ~smirks like L~ I have something random to mention. I was in church and the lesson was about dating. The guy made a comment like, "Light can't be with darkness." and I giggled, thinking, of course, of only the translation of Raito's name. Even better was when he said "Light is God"... but I really can't remember the context. I still giggle however. Nicely done fic. I've caught up again =3 CHU!
gin 2008-03-03 ch 1, anon.	abuseThank you for writing from his POV. I personally think Soichirou is a wonderful character, but he's so under appreciated. One thing I really admire from you is your characterization. You are able to think in their heads, which not many people are able to pull off. I think it's safe to say that I'm hooked to your writings. ; )
PenArtist10000 2008-02-29 ch 1,	abusegreat!
Pareidolia 2008-02-29 ch 1,	abuseThis is the first fiction I've read that was from Soichiro's point of view, and it was brilliant. I like to think that Soichiro saw something in his son when Raito became Kira, that he really loved him so much that he saw the change. And wow, most of what you wrote makes a ton of sense, even without the LxRaito. Would Raito ever marry? Would he really even spare Misa the time of day? Fantastic work.
RoxasIsReal13 2008-02-29 ch 1,	abuseQuite franky absolutely brillant.
lightslaststand 2008-02-29 ch 1,	abusefriggin amaazing! loved the lxlight bits :) damn good fic :D
phoenix of hell 2008-02-29 ch 1,	abuseLoved it! All of them, actually. Yeah, Soichiro might actually suspect something, but I can imagine him keeping his faith 'till the last moment.
dnangel648 2008-02-28 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow, that was amazingly emo...It's awesome!!>.
momijikaya 2008-02-28 ch 1,	abuseI totally agree that Soichiro is not clueless about Raito. And your writing is as good as always. Never thought 50 sentence challenge can affect me like a long fic. By the way, you haven't abandoned Spira, right? Please? I love all your fics (especially Reigning!) and always squeal with joy when you post anything but I miss Spira!
Fedia 2008-02-28 ch 1,	abuseOf course, coming from your pen, it was very good. Still, it made me tremendously sad. I don't know why, opposed to common opinion,I don't envision Shoichiro as a great father. I'm not saying he was bad either, bu I really think Raito's family, except maybe for Sayu, failed to see behind the prodigy the boy was. Maybe there was an instance when they simply couldn't keep up with him anymore, so they just let him be. It's usual when children outsmart their parents.
kazokuhouou 2008-02-28 ch 1,	abuseYou. You write the Soichiro I want to RP.
annakas 2008-02-27 ch 1,	abuseOh this was good. Interesting POV.

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