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| Silent Moon 14 2008-04-29 ch 1, | abusehey! good story! |
| Death angel chick211 2008-03-26 ch 2, | abuseNice chapter.Say were those keys that girl was using Oblivion and Oath keeper?(Just curious.[Man one of these days my curiosity is gonna get me killed.)Well anyways please write more.Talk to ya next time I review. -T.Z |
| Death angel chick211 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseYour chapter was kinda short but,It was awesome dude or dudette(Oops did I miss spell that).And on another note:YAY another cliffie.You do those a lot don't you?Well keep it up`cause as you know I love em.(Was I bein selfish?Sorry if I was.)Well anyways talk to ya next time I review. |
| Rainpath 2008-03-01 ch 2, | abuseI'm not really sure where this story is going, but your description and chapter length us getting better. |
| Danielle 2008-03-01 ch 2, anon. | abuseIt was really interesting |
| Rainpath 2008-02-28 ch 1, | abuseAs I've said in other reviews, you've got great spelling and punctuation, but you really need to work on detailing the scene. If you had detailed the fight, it would have made the chapter longer and more interesting. Keep writing! |