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Reviews for: The Dance
snowman794
2008-08-21 . chapter 1
wow, thats a different way to look at it, well done ^^
whitem
2008-02-28 . chapter 1
I like the confusion that's evident in Kim's writing as she tries to say how much she had cared for Eric, yet hated him down to his single-chain molecules.

Truly without Eric... there would be no Kim and Ron.

Nice one-shot...
CajunBear73
2008-02-28 . chapter 1
Very unique take on what Kim had felt for Eric before she learned his true identity and mission.

Her first romantic encounter was as beautiful as one should be, yet it turned out as it did due to his own wishes about his creator's plans. Her heart did break, but someone was present that wasn't the polished product that Eric was, yet was what she needed and wanted after all.

Good closure to Kim's heart from the Night of the Diablos.

CB73
Solarstone
2008-02-28 . chapter 1
Very different and entirely plausible take on what KP felt for Eric during StD. I strictly avoid stories that deal with Kim's romantic feelings towards someone other than Ron, but I quite enjoyed this.
Mr. Wizard
2008-02-28 . chapter 1
A nice examination of StD. It's amazing how life puts us where we're going. Good job of peeking into Kim's mind.
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