Absolutely stunning! Cortana's emotions were definitely the highlight of this story. And while the Chief started off more bitingly sarcastic at the beginning than I'd ever expect from him, you did a good job overall capturing what would really hurt him most in this situation. Well done.

Wonderful story! There were some glitches, where whole chunks of sentences went missing, but with a little thought, it wasn't too hard to fill in the blanks (usually).

I've only recently discovered Halo fanfiction, and yours is only the second pure Halo (non-crossover) story I've read. I like this one better than the other one - here, we see John and Cortana fighting against boredom and the elements, it's more cerebral than reading about John blowing up enemy drones or whatever.

Anyway, I enjoyed the story and will be checking out your profile to see what else you've done (I found this on SnappleAddict's favourites list).

Thanks for writing! ~"~

OMG This story wasw so great

YOu should write a series..


THe ship names made me laugh my arse off

FREAKING EPIC! Awesome story, i loved it keep writing!
FEPIC FEPIC FEPIC FEPIC

After 26 chapters I'm completely amazed at your talents in writing and portraying emotion. I have followed the whole story the entire time you've been writing it and I thoroughly enjoyed every minute of it. I look forward to any writings of yours in the future and I hope you might do another story in this subject sometime again. Thank you so much for spending your time to entertain people such as me for so long.

Thanks,
Jay

i really enjoyed this!

My being in college and lacking an X-box, or the time to play were I in possession of one, means I was going through Halo withdrawals. Thankfully, I stumbled upon this most excellent story, and have gotten my Halo fix. Many thanks for that. :D

An excellent story! ;)

I certainly wouldn't mind a sequel! :)

You do know you HAVE to do a sequel, don't you? Well?

And so it ends, and the Chief is alive and well! :P

sequiltize me captan!

Woo hoo! Saved!

Nicely done, I liked how you portrayed the relationship between John and Cortana, and it's good to see that they're in good hands.

Ironic that a man made for war would become an ambassador... Great ending...

omg Chief has finally been rescued whohah! hey can you make a sequel to this please

My inner Halo fangirl is infinitely pleased.
Can I hug these guys or what?!
*glomps MC and Arbiter*
I'm so glad you're both okay!
^^
MC: *sweatdrop*
RB: *awkward smile*
Cortana: *lol*