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| naturally morbid 2008-02-27 ch 1,  | abuseWell I am certainly glad I stayed up just a bit longer so that I would see this ^_^ The way this was written with the separate monologues in separate time frames is really unique and actually to me, makes it easier to understand what is going on, without actually stating much, the sort of less is more property. I like the rather sharp contrast between Isaak and Dietrich at first and then how it slides into Dietrich becoming a part of Isaak or vice versa, slipping into a zealous following of the very god-like character of the one and only Isaak. Like the rebirth mentioned at the end of Dietrich's second, proving Isaak's status. Isaak seems to have a very insane mind, but it works out for him. I also like how Dietrich felt that Isaak was stealing from him, how Isaak seems to be taking everything from him, without actually defining just what it is he is taking. Interesting story and I am glad to see something from you ^_^ |