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| babygeek310 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abuseVery Jack, so naturally its funny! Good job. |
| Rac80 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuseROTFLOL! great insight into Jack's mind! |
| Jasmina 2008-03-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseROFLMAO! That was great :) |
| jumble65 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuseROFLMAO! Well done Bekki, read his mind perfectly! |
| mara-anni 2008-03-07 ch 1, | abuseROFLMAO! Nice Bekki, totally Jack too :D :D Hehehehehehehehe... |
| PapayaK 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abuseHee Hee I love that episode - usually for the angst, but you made this totally believable! That's just what would go through Jack's mind before he got back to business. |
| lemonpiefirefly 2008-02-29 ch 1, | abuseDeliciously, indeed! Very nice little POV |
| kittn 2008-02-29 ch 1, | abuseWonderful!! |
| TiaRat 2008-02-28 ch 1, | abuseYep, that pretty much is implied by the look on his face in that scene. |
| gibblesgal 2008-02-28 ch 1, | abuseHe could just cover his eyes or turn his back while she's changing. Yeah, right. |
| Dreaming of Jack 2008-02-28 ch 1, | abusefun and cute! i love it! |
| cL235 2008-02-28 ch 1, | abuseokay.. that made me giggle. |
| Oma-1 2008-02-28 ch 1, | abuseRITGLAMO!! Hysterically funny...how about a chapter 2 when she's actually getting changed!?!?!? *hopeful grin* |
| 7 League Boots 2008-02-28 ch 1, | abuseLOL! Brilliant and very Jack! Great read! |
| BrenRenQoI 2008-02-28 ch 1, | abuseROFLMAO! Great ficlet! |