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babygeek310
2008-04-16
ch 1,
abuseVery Jack, so naturally its funny! Good job.
Rac80
2008-03-22
ch 1,
abuseROTFLOL! great insight into Jack's mind!
Jasmina
2008-03-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseROFLMAO! That was great :)
jumble65
2008-03-22
ch 1,
abuseROFLMAO! Well done Bekki, read his mind perfectly!
mara-anni
2008-03-07
ch 1,
abuseROFLMAO!

Nice Bekki, totally Jack too :D :D

Hehehehehehehehe...
PapayaK
2008-03-06
ch 1,
abuseHee Hee
I love that episode - usually for the angst, but you made this totally believable! That's just what would go through Jack's mind before he got back to business.
lemonpiefirefly
2008-02-29
ch 1,
abuseDeliciously, indeed! Very nice little POV
kittn
2008-02-29
ch 1,
abuseWonderful!!
TiaRat
2008-02-28
ch 1,
abuseYep, that pretty much is implied by the look on his face in that scene.
gibblesgal
2008-02-28
ch 1,
abuseHe could just cover his eyes or turn his back while she's changing. Yeah, right.
Dreaming of Jack
2008-02-28
ch 1,
abusefun and cute! i love it!
cL235
2008-02-28
ch 1,
abuseokay.. that made me giggle.
Oma-1
2008-02-28
ch 1,
abuseRITGLAMO!! Hysterically funny...how about a chapter 2 when she's actually getting changed!?!?!? *hopeful grin*
7 League Boots
2008-02-28
ch 1,
abuseLOL! Brilliant and very Jack! Great read!
BrenRenQoI
2008-02-28
ch 1,
abuseROFLMAO! Great ficlet!
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