That was really good.
Hardly anyone writes good AU (heck, hardly anyone bothers to write AU), but I have to say, you pulled it off.
This story is fantastic!!
Sad, but so so good.
My favorite type.

Nice work. I like your writing style.

Wow. You're one of the very few authors (Armageddon Child is one, and I daren't include myself) who writes future!AU with aplomb. Good job.

I like it. Creative idea. No one has ever stopped and putted the by-half plan actually taking place in the story. I mean, that was the mission, wasn't it? To get rid of all imperfections. Haha, awesome.