aw

Intro is very good for a full length story, very descriptive (maybe overly so...do we really need to know the girls last names?) but I could not get into it. In fact I did not even get past the 4th paragraph. It simply dragged too much for fiction. Good luck with future stories.
Cheers Jen

I loved this...it was so sweet and the characters were right on target. I really wish paul and lena had hooked up too...please write more lena and paul fics if they're anything like this one they will be well recieved

update soon!

luv it! im a fan! :o)

This was amazing. Seriously.
I've read all four of the books and if I didn't know you wrote this, I would have thought Ann Brashares did herself. :)

i loved your one shot!!
paul nd lena are soo cute together!!