plz update plz update plz update! need 2 no wat happens need 2!

love it. please write more soon!

I've got so many words for this...great, good writing, suspenseful and confusing...I'm a bit lost, but maybe it's just me. Oh well.

Good story you have here. Writing is great, and well...I've ran out of things to say. Keep up the good work!

i didn't expect this for sure! very good!

OH CAN'T WAIT TO SEE. IF YOU NEED ANY MUSE IDEA'S LET ME KNOW

O ! This is gettin real good. Sho kewl, YAY, please update soon, i need tuh noe wht happenz

ARGH too short! PLEASE update soon I gotta know!

I know what you mean about writing yourself into a corner. Just let it flow. It'll be strange, but it'll fit, and it'll come out better than you planned.

this is becoming very interesting... and misterious...

nice chapter.

Excellent chap, coming up with a plot is hard sometimes

I can NOT wait to see what happens next. Please update soon!

Good chapter! I will wait for the next one)

You may be clueless, but it's a very interesting clueless..and I can't wait to see what's next!

I love this! PLEASE update soon and DON'T stop writing before you finish the story; I HATE it when people do that in general, but especially with stories like this (good ones).